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Speaker

Really great story. With the exception of a few minor errors and spelling mistakes and some words that I personally wouldn't use it's a great story! The characters are people who you can relate to and the story flows very nicely and the plot is quite intriguing. Can't wait to see how the author ends it

Gteat story

I haven't finished this story yet but I'm really enjoying it so far I like the way it expounds on the lives of the disciples and of other biblical characters. The grammar could use some work but it is a great story, definitely recommend

Good intriguing story

Only one chapter so far but I'm already enjoying it. Only thing I'd recommend for the author is that they slow down a bit and add in a little more description and detail but the plot is definitely intriguing

Very nice

Very good expansion of the biblical story, I really like what you've done. I like that the chapters are not to long too

An intriguing read

I'll be honest I probably would rate this story higher if it was my preferred genre but it isn't so that's the main reason I put it so low. The story itself though is an intriguing concept for sure. There's a few grammatical errors and sometimes it's hard to tell who's talking but those are both easy things to correct. All in all though it is an intriguing read, and perhaps the grammar gets better as I have admittedly not finished reading the book yet. Take none of this criticism too harshly though, as it is not meant to be harsh in any way.

The tempter cometh

This is my own story so I admit I'm probably biased but I think even if I didn't write this I'd still give it 5 stars because it's that good. It adds on to a story that we Christians know very well the temptation of Jesus but my story expounds on that time however it still stays true to the scriptures and there's multiple scriptural references. This book also ties into my two other works "what child is this?" And "I was there" so I'd encourage you to check out those two as well. Thanks for taking the time to read my story and my review:) God bless. Feel free to leave a review of your own.

In The Gap

This book is very well written and unlike any I've found on Inkett. It's a Good Christian thriller which is a rare find these days. I love the plot and the characters and the characters interactions with one another especially the siblings. The characters feel very raw and real and a person easily could get wrapped up in this story. In a good way;)