Lee A. Forman

"Wishing" you luck.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I liked the viewpoint of the genie, and how he summed up humanity by our flaws and strengths. The first person description was spot on, and I was able to connect with the character. I almost wanted to see more, see how the person opening the bottle would wish, but I also like that you left it up to the reader to think about. I know while reading I started thinking about what things I would wish for.

Amazing story!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. The use of description was incredibly vivid, and I absolutely loved the creature. In spite of his cruelty he's just so damn likeable for some reason. At the beginning of the story I didn't see the plot going where you took it, but I was pleasantly surprised! I also have to say that your use of present tense was spot on. I've read a lot of present tense stories, and many read very awkwardly, but not this. This is definitely a story I will remember reading!

Great story!

I enjoyed this piece of flash fiction very much. I've never read such a good description of someone falling to their death. Well done! I like how the character is more focused on who pushed her than on death itself.

Great flash fiction!

Great use of description. Awesome story for how short it is! The first line was great, when I read it I had to know what the heck it was about. I love the twisted nature of this piece and the humor of how the killer wants to be something so preposterous as a Princess!