jimineejamzz

Very Good Story!

I binge-read this story and really enjoyed it.

I think some of the storyline felt a bit rushed, mostly concerning the steamy moments (and trust me when I say I love those moments). To be more specific, I felt like one moment he was angry and then next, he was lustful.

There were some grammar mistakes that I found, but nothing that pulled me out of the story (I’m the grammar police, can’t you tell?).

Other than that though, I actually really enjoyed this story. I liked the fact that their wolf had a separate name from their own. It helped identify who was feeling what at each specific time. I also enjoyed Sasha’s female empowerment. Really good story!

Great Story...

I enjoyed the idea of the story. Best friends turned lovers/friends with benefits turned lovers is always a good storyline in my opinion. The storyline had me liking Cameron a lot at the beginning, but when Aaron came into the picture I actually thought he was a better fit for Lily than Cameron was. The aggressiveness that came from Aaron towards the end came out of left field for me and the ending seemed a bit rushed, but it was still a good story. The smut was well-written and the dynamics between the characters were good as well. Although, I would have liked a bit more character development from Cameron. A few grammatical errors, but that happens to all of us. It didn't pull me out of the story, so all is well. Still a great story. Definitely one I'll think about for a while.