jmsparrow

Creepy Premise

"Where the Footprints End" has a creepy premise, which Ant Bethell wrote creepily. It is tense from the beginning and horrific in the right places. I wish I knew a little bit more about the pendant, especially what it looks like before the story. The main character has a clear voice, and there are enough coincidental details about him. Sometimes the grammar is a little bumpy, but the content is still understandable and readable. Reading this story is definitely worth the time!

Relatable

This is a good way to describe writer's block. I think the writer's block that received this letter would understand exactly what the problem is, and that the author explained the situation as calmly and reasonably as anybody could expect. Hopefully, the block understands that it should not return, even to argue or beg. (Also, I like the Jeeves and Wooster reference!)