ladyloki

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so well written

I hope you'll look at my comments on the story they basically explain everything

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wow...

this book was amazing! absolutely captivating! I was in tears eating ice cream by the end of it. great work would love to read more.

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really good

extremely good story, some punctuation and spelling mishaps, but those happen sometimes word don't come out the way you want them to! please write more stories I love your writing style.

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honestly this story was pretty good. the plot was great, but the thing is the chapters were much too short and the story shouldn't skip that much time.

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oh...my...wow....

I have no words. this story is exceptionally good! please try to write more you have me hooked on it!

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so good

i found this story consuming my every waking moment, as a frequent writer myself I don't think I could write anything even close to the climax and intensity that kept me hooked on this story for two days! that is probably one of the longest it ever took me to read a story I would love to read more like this. 10/10 would read again. READ YOU WON'T BE SORRY.

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