M.S. Farrell

Hmm

The plot is really good but it was very jump around and I felt like some things could have been explained a lot more and the final shift to the original just didn't seem to fit with how she felt before the wreck. The idea was neat but maybe there should have been a better shift there, something more drastic to make her change her mind? She left her true mate to go be with him then after brief amnesia all that changed for someone altogether new? Just a very strange flow there and felt like an off track jump

Enthralling

Loved it. First several chapters need some editing yet but I caught the memo at the beginning so I still have that 4 ;) Had a very unique voice despite being a well run genre and structure. Was just the read I needed

fantastic

This was an amazing fanfiction and reminded me a lot of one I wrote when I was first reading the series myself. I absolutely loved it. Hoping you write more and eventually maybe her blood parentage will be revealed.