Anjelly_Ace

"I love writing tragedies but can't bear to read one."

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amazing! I can barely predict what's going to happen next!

the story and plot are amazing i cant' wait to read the next update!

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has room for improvement

Right off the bat I noticed some grammatical and spelling errors but that can be easily remedied with some editing and proofreading. The story's premise is interesting and the plot intriguing. But I would suggest changing up the synopsis a little.

Suggestion: The introduction in the beginning was okay but could be a bit better. How about trying to put up a thrilling scene instead? since this story is a thriller, that would certainly interest possible readers to read on further. You could also skip on the lines of "Join Blaire...and co. etc." since according to my coach in school publication before, since the reader would most probably read, there's no reason to mention that since they'll do that anyways.

Anyway, i hope my suggestion helped and this is also speaking for myself since my story also has a lot of these problems. Your story has potential and i hope you'll continue to do your best in completing it!

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Yep. Worth the read

I really liked the story as well as the plot. Great job!

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The King's Slave

Niiiicee.... like really. this is one of the best stories i've read.. i've probably reread this about ten times already.

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Awesome

Damn. you always amaze me. your stories make my heart jump badly like i'm falling off a cliff or something.

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