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Wonderful Story! Keep up the good work!

I really love the idea and the plot, and everything is just beautiful, especially the way you've exhibited first person POV. There's some areas I believe were accidental mistakes, but they were slightly confusing. However, keep up the good work!

Amazing Story - Can't wait for more chapters!

The story is just so well constructed and so intriguing. While short it packs in a lot of details. The vocabulary use is really skillful and just adds to that beautiful emotional depth. The prologue is really intriguing, so can't wait for when there's more!

Amazing Story and Cover!

Really love this story and its plot. The writing style is beautiful, and the different vocabulary used is just mesmerizing and adding to the story's charm. Overall, the writing really exhibits the emotional factor while still fitting the cafe vibe. I think it's just me but the third person POV at the start does make it a bit detached, but afterwards it's beautiful. I highly recommend this to anyone who just wants a chill read with a little twist in there!

Pretty when you Lie

Love this! Beautiful plot, I really love the lore. It's great that this plot isn't a book that's mature, it really reminds me of Ann Liang's Book idk what it was called, but like this one is like poor rich kid type. Please name the girl from chapter one who hissed Cassie the Hissy. Thanks