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Borderline chaos

Name: Borderline chaos
Author: _Ea_C055

_Ea_C055 1 story

Poetry Tw Spokenwordpoetry

Summary

Poems?

Genre: Poetry

Author: _Ea_C055

Status: 4yrs ago

Chapters: 1

Rating: n/a

Age Rating: 16+

Poem

I know that i will not be going to heaven,

The place with golden gates and white lights,

where the angels sing for eternity and the good are rewarded

I will not get to meet God, his son or his sons parents, I am not that kind of person

I have lied

I have spent nights hurting myself just because of how ritualistic the whole thing is, the red lines hidden under a bandage and more lies

I have numbed the pain with a stupid green plant and a lighter, my lungs dealing with everything my brain could not

The things I have said enough to hurt anyone,

I will not meet God, or his son or his sons parents, i am not that kind of person

I am not sweet nothings, the lines of me rather harsh actually

I do not ask for forgiveness, i am to scared

I would catch on fire in a simple 2 mile radius of pergatory itself, the miniscus of my soul ever contaminating

I will not meet God, or his son or his sons parents, i am not that kind of person

I know that i will not h

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