What is your opinion?
The Blood King
"This is a fantastic story. The authors' descriptions bring it to life. It is a very sad story, and the main character truly goes through every trial with determination. I would recommend this book to anyone over 18. 💞🩷💞"
The Blood King
"S tender emotional love story that keeps you drawn in until the very end. So sad that Capsian died. She never got to spend her life with the man she loved🌹"
Love Beyond Time
"Quite the suspenseful story. Very gripping and well written.."
TimeBound
"Really a phenomenal book. Would definitely recommend to anyone who likes trippy, traumatic, intense story lines. Very interesting characters and plot."
Time bound
"Great plot! I enjoyed it!"
TimeBound
"It was off to a slow start but once it started omg I couldn't put it down! I love the main character and I feel so bad for everything she has to endure. I literally cannot wait for more updates. "
A Traveler’s Curse
"Okay so first off, a really nice story with huge potential parts of which are beautifully written. However attention to detail is a problem, the main male characters’s names change part of the way in and then change back for the last few chapters. Lots of issues with time frames, when she goes back in time she tells the King that she’s from the year 5012 but later she says it’s 1223 amongst others. This makes it sound like I didn’t like this book and I really really did but for it to achieve its full potential it needs a strong edit"
time Bound
""I liked the idea of time traveling, especially the way it connected with magic. The in-between smoke creatures were a very smart move. I loved the writing too, and the emotions it conveyed were very strong. Overall, a very nice story which I would definitely recommend.""
A riveting story!
"I love the plot of the story, it's imaginative and fresh! The FMC is realistic, her character development is compelling, and I can't wait to see her grow further as the book progresses. The world-building is good, and the wording further pulls the reader into a world of castles, princesses, and magic. There are some typos and mix-up of tenses, but nothing that draws the reader out of the story. The story progresses a bit quickly for my taste, but I have to read the whole of it to pass final judgement. I would advise on more showing rather than telling in the first chapters, so the reader would get to know more about the characters and the world through dialogue rather than exposition. Also, focus more on the characters' emotions in the first several chapters to make the storytelling more impactful from the get-go. As it is, the love between the main characters kind of came out of nowhere (in my view, which of course is subjective), some build-up would have made me more invested in rooting for them from the beginning. Not that I'm not rooting for them now - you've created a beautiful, gripping story that I can't wait to read more of :) You're very talented, you've won me over as a fan!"
A Traveler's Curse
"The heroine except for having 2 children, had lost both of the love of her lives. Yet as a time traveler, she never went back in time to change the results? That's what I thought one of the reasons for their powers was for"
Great concept
"I think the concept here is very smart - creating a situation for Princess Kyla that she needs to solve with her newfound magic. I personally thought the pacing was pretty good too, although the plot really zoomed by sometimes. Honestly, solid idea, and solid usage of the time magic. I struggled with the amount of exposition though. It was a little much for me, with a lot of emotions and situations being told rather than shown through the characters. I think a little more character development would be wonderful too just to help develop the romance more (which moved a little quick for me but I’m also a fan of the slower burn type of style lol). Personally, I also would’ve aged Kyla up a bit both to match her love interest’s age, and because I often mistook her to be in her 20s, but overall, a good fantasy plot. "
