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Heart wrenching

"Thank you writing this. You did an amazing job of pointing out the glitter and glamour that begins a death defying tight rope walk of addiction. Thank you for showing the harsh reality. I appreciate you broaching this topic with grace."

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Life changing

"It's very educative and create awareness, also to know the danger that flocks with drugs I love it💯💯👍👍👍"

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Cocaine Hearts

"I think you've done a good job of making your point. The only mistake I noticed was when she followed Brandon to the hospital. You wrote them going to the woods in his car, then had her follow the ambulance in hers. Good read anyway🌹"

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So Real!

"Well, this has been one of the realist stories I've read so far. Addiction is no joke, and I think by the time that little voice whispers in your head it's already almost too late. Thank you for staying true to the dangers and tragedy that is so unnecessary. It was a breath of fresh air, but to be honest, I loathe crying, so lol, I'm not thanking you for the tears. I truly hope you raise awareness... Great story!"

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Cocaine Hearts

"So far I am captivated. The writing is a mix between sophistication and real raw unedited emotion. The mix of wordy descriptions, cuss words, and an interesting storyline makes this a perfect read for a young adult. "

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Shocking Twist

"Mostly a good story. That ending though was tragic and not what was expected at all. Well done"

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Cocaine hearts

"Great read!"

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Cocaine Hearts

"Really interesting and good storyline. Easy to keep up with and good plot twists. I can't wait to see how it ends!!"

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Not a typical teen story

"I’m just here proofreading my own book but let me know what you think in the comments! "

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Not a Typical Teen Stiry

"I am really sad I finished the book😭 but it's one of my favorite books and I would love like a part 2 or something"

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Cocaine hearts

"Great read so far!"

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