What is your opinion?
Twisted Attractions
"Such a intriguing love story. Really hits the Death Til Us Part when it comes to love."
Attractions
"This book was VERY well written. I hope you write more books because that was REALLY good. Keep it up!"
Attractionss
"This story was intriguing and mysterious, but I wished it was longer. I don't mean to offend anyone, but I wish I didn't read this book. Now I'm stuck wondering what happens next. - Dawn Wright"
Attractions
"the writing is immaculate I would recommend it to my mentors"
Attractions
"Wow... Its preatty short... But beleive me it's amazing... The author must be very happy for the way of writting does he/she have.... I really really enjoy it..."
Incredible
"The poetic writing style used to write this short piece is absolutely incredible and the level of writing is so beyond the average authors. "
Brilliant!
"I don't even know what to say - I am in awe. It was such a brilliantly crafted tale, I was left breathless. The beauty with which we slowly realize that the man is planning to kill his beloved wife was gripping. The wife's attack on the man was effectively foreshadowed in the first few paragraphs. The man's initial separation from his wife seemed a little disappointing - as if their extraordinary love couldn't bear the pressures of the world which every couple undergoes. There was amazing subtlety in the ordering of the recount - the wife's first kill is described to us before their reunion (which was chronologically incorrect), which helped to instil the idea that the true horror for him was the initial separation. I wonder why the wife killed someone, I would have liked to learn more about that. The imagery and expressionism was beautiful. Every sentence had a grace, and words were used in such exciting ways to create new forms of descriptions. A few things I noticed which should be corrected are: 1) "Voice spills rich and aromatic" Aromatic is used for smells, and even by long stretches of imagination, its use to describe a voice seemed wrong. 2) There should be commas around "when the only worries were dressing attires for dances and gas money for weekend drives" I loved the story, I don't know how else to put it. You should write more here on Inkitt. The concept of attractions was enthralling - and the last line left me gasping. Such beauty, the woman's attractions to her innate monster juxtaposed with her love for her husband. Bravo!"
Beautiful
"Thank you for this. Little did I know that such a familiar idea could be presented in such a new and refreshing way. The prose are wonderful and classic while still retaining modernity. I was taken immediately by the story and felt deeply the sense of attraction. I can't wait to read more."
famished memory | silky silhouette
"I was drawn in immediately by your gorgeous prose. Your descriptions, the way you use uncommon or quirky or off-kilter ways of describing things, are stunning, and give the piece so much substance and weight. After a certain point I could infer what had happened to the wife, but that didn't mar my curiosity to see what would happen to the husband. Really stunning work!"
Attractions
"This story is masterfully crafted. It is familiar yet unique. I greatly enjoyed it. It did what I think short stories are intended to do. You become intimate with the characters quickly. The story itself is powerful."
Attractions
"It really wasn't a novel. It was descriptive and more like a sonnet or poem. I really don't have an opinion. "
Beginning
"Will see how it goes. Its very difficult to read as therw are alot of metaphores. To early to say if i like or not"
Okay
"It's an okay story. I hate what happened to the new alpha. Losing someone esp. The only mate you will ever be truly made for blows."
Attraction
"It was interesting Love everything about it"
