Multiverse Mischief
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Multiverse Mischief

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Story Notes

Background: In 2019, I created a book idea called Multiverse Mischief, which would follow the story of a character who to his surprise was chosen to wield a legendary item known as the Multiversal Power, which would allow him to travel between universes. He had believed that the multiverse was different variants of the ‘core’ universe. But he was surprised when a paradox in the multiverse occurred that all the universes merged with the core universe, that each person was not a variant of people in the core, it was fictional characters. Meaning the core universe was not just the epicenter of the multiverse, it is also responsible for the creation of new universes.

Cool idea right? Unfortunately, my idea was never published because the costs of a publisher were more than I thought I would make on selling copies of the book. Recently I was digging through my closet and found my old notebook full of ideas for this book idea. I remembered I was on inkitt which allowed me to publish for free. So, here we go, I present to you a story 4 long years in the making, from a first-person perspective contrary to my usual third, Multiverse Mischief!

This is a modified version of the original idea, which features a fictionalized version of myself.

Happy reading,

Austin Overton

Summary

The multiverse is in danger and only one team can save it. After years of being disbanded, a famous group of heroes from anime and fictional universes has reunited to save it once again, five years after they saw each other for the last time. Now I step into the conflict to save every universe there is and to change the outcome.

Status
Complete
Chapters
14
Rating
4.5 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The ad

The beep of the alarm clock. Absolutely annoying, isn't it? Well, I have to put up with it because I can't turn the alarm clock's schedule off. I usually just take the battery out, but then I can't tell the time. So, I just put up with it. My name is Austin, and I'm just a guy. Honestly, everything is normal and-

Then I saw the ad. The ad on the wall. It had a strange symbol. The symbol was pitch black and looked like two greater/less than symbols pushed together and cut short. The ad read, 'MULTIVERSE MISCHEIF IS BACK AFTER BEING DISBANDED IF YOU WANT TO SAVE THE MULTIVERSE, APPLY FOR REMOTE AGENTSHIP TODAY'. The ad intrigued me. A remote agentship for a multiverse-saving team seemed like a great opportunity. I read closer. 'The address is 3948 w Generation Road.' I nodded. Later that day I walked to the address. There was a clerk sitting at a desk. "Hello," I said. "I'd like to apply for agency." I added. The clerk looked up at me. "Do you have any special fighting ability or skill?" He asked. "Yes, I'm a martial artist." I replied. The clerk nodded. "Alright, I'll let Commander Rareheart know you're here." He spoke. I nodded and sat in the waiting room.

The clerk looked back at me once more. "Your name, sir?" He asked. "Austin." I replied. The clerk nodded and returned to his computer. "Austin, we're ready." Another clerk said. I walked to the door at the front of the waiting room. "I will now take you to commander Rareheart." Said the clerk. Commander Rareheart was a tall standing man with blonde hair slightly darker than my own. "Martial Arts, was it?" He spoke. "Yep." I replied. Rareheart nodded. "Definitely useful." He spoke. "As a remote agent, you will operate in parts of the multiverse that aren't in enough danger to deploy the main 11 agents.

"I think we've got enough information. Oh, do you have a criminal record?" Rareheart said. "No, sir." I replied. Rareheart gave a slight gesture with his hand. "Well then, I won't need to file that paperwork." He spoke. "What paperwork?" I asked. "Since Multiverse Mischief works in close proximity with the governments of this world, several countries offer full and unconditional pardons to criminals in return for becoming agents to protect the multiverse. If they commit a crime off-world, that will of course, not be tolerated." Rareheart said. I nodded. "Your first mission will be assigned tomorrow." Rareheart said. I thanked him and left.

The next day, I checked my mailbox. There was an envelope. In the envelope there was a smartwatch, a notepad, a pen, and my mission assignment. I opened the assignment.

'Thank you for joining MM. You are listed as a Martial Artist, to help us identify you as such, please wear your Gi and belt while on duty. Your first mission assignment is to universe ECR-1B, more widely known as the anime, Erased. A paradox is currently occurring due to the unfavorable outcome that came from the original timeline. Your mission is to go into the forementioned universe and alter the timeline to create a more favorable outcome. You have 6 months of off-world permit time to complete this mission and after which, you will be pulled back to the Core Universe.'

I placed the assignment back in the envelope and walked back inside my home. I prepared for my mission.

Let Austin Overton know what you thought about this chapter!

Omariewriting
Omariewriting

I feel like going to the agency was too fast and easy. So they just let anyone in without checking their background properly? Why did they choose Austin? Why is he so special? You need to develop his background so that it can make more sense.
Also, establishing his life at the beginning of the story would have us understand why he wanted to apply for the agency. How old is he? Does he live alone? Is he a teenager? Those things should be clear at the beginning of the story.
I believe this story has much potential but needs to be more fleshed out.
And for dialogue, each time someone talks, it should be a new paragraph not to confuse readers.

4 years

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