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I love it!
"I think that this could definitely become a well-known folktale, and it's written like one. The only suggestion I would recommend is detailing in a bit more, but if it was written for a younger audience/as a folktale, I find no reason to."
awesome
"an awesome story..no mistakes..the way u describe everything was perfect..u really have a talent of witing..pls keep writing and I am looking forward to read ur other stories...KEEP IT UP"
Nice
"I think this was a good read. The only thing I can tell you is on your blurb it is a short summary of what your story is about but you seem to give away too much in them something that I have noticed in all your works. Other than that you did a great write and I have noticed that you have improved your writing from other works I have read."
Adorable
"Short stories rule! Haha, haven't heard of any contemporary fable-makers so this was very nice. Plus refreshing. Style was also refreshing -- solid grammar, concise sentences."
cute idea
"I love the story and the plot. How the characters acted towards each other, and the meaning behind the tortoise. It's true that it is better to experience something without speaking. I do suggest to edit the writing style, such as where quotes and other things are placed. But overall I loved it!"
incredible
"I'm waiting for more chapters. I like your writing, you're very creative.The beginning is very good, I hope to see what will happen."
Fun
"Needs a few tweaks but for where it was going it held a solid plot. Could be a fun little children's book one day if you get some great illustrations. Holds a conveying message about doing as your told or suffer unbound consequences. If this book was on the shelf today and if i had a kid i would buy it. Overall well done fix some grammar and sentence structure and it will be awesome. And yes i upvoted it in case you comment asking me to. Cheers!"
Adorable!
"I loved this cute short story and could read it to a child and they would be able to understand it easily and follow along. I would recommend you make the conversations less obvious (more smooth), but the story is put together very well with no mistakes I can see. If this gets published I can see it easily becoming a successful children's book. :) Great job and keep writing!"
Short but sweet
"I guess this is your version of an existing fable as I seem to remember a similar story from when I was younger. Nicely put together short story."
sweet
"Your story reminded me of the fox and the scorpion story, but yours is much cuter. However, you told most of the story in the introduction. The grammar in this one still needs work, but is much better than the first story I read. Keep moving forward it will all come together."
