Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

The Madame

"Such a chilling story."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Ooh!

"The dark vein is kept all throughout the chapter. To be honest, I'd thought it would be one of those cliché things people get away with but it isn't. Sad there wasn't a second chapter at the time I was reading. This be an excellent read. There is no fan of dark fantasy, Gothic or paranormal fiction that wouldn't find this captivating in the very least."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Enticed

"At the start I didn't think it was going to be very good. How wrong I was. As I read it pulled me in and enticed me into reading the rest. Very imaginative and mysterious. I like it."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Amazingly eerie

"I don't completely understand what happened, but the atmosphere and mood of this story were extraordinarily well done, and the whole thing seems very mysterious. I genuinely shuddered a couple times. I don't generally read horror but you are clearly very skilled at writing it."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation