El Mundo Es by Alberto_Galiana_Saenz at Inkitt
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El mundo es

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Summary

Porque el mundo es bueno.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Remembranza (2020)


Corre el auto plateado

por la ribera del Miño.

Pátina de luz del agua

que acompaña al tiempo y fragua

los recuerdos de un chiquillo.

Impronta breve de duelo

que arrastra dura el pasado

de aquel que habita la tierra

y también del ave fiera

que hace tiempo que alzó el vuelo.


Los gigantes del pasado,

hace mucho que quedaron

a mis pies, que van descalzos.

Paseaba esta ribera

con el río de la mano,

sintiendo en mis pies el agua

que ahora se lleva los versos

de aquella vez, la primera.


La corriente hoy me devuelve,

firme a mis manos maduras,

la misma gota de agua,

que yo en tiempos de locura

vertí en forma de una lágrima,

fruto de aquella amargura

que, al arrancarme de ti,

fue a manchar aquella senda

que recorrí de tu mano.

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