What is your opinion?
The lost princess
"For a 13 year old you have great potential. I highly recommend this book to the other readers. I would love to read more of your works. Hope there are more chapters comming :) "
The lost princess
"For a 13 year old you have great potential. I highly recommend this book to the other readers. I would love to read more of your works. Hope there are more chapters comming :) "
What lies in store for Adrielle?…
"Adrielle flees from her home and goes to a castle that her and her father used to spend a lot of time at before he had died. Her relationship with her mother was not good because her mother was abusive towards her. After she’s been living at the castle for a while, an explorer named Sebastian enters what he thinks is an abandoned castle, but the castle is actually the one that Adrielle is living in. Adrielle says that he can stay at the castle for the night, but also says that he must leave in the morning. Sebastian wants to tell her brother where she is, but she orders him not to, and he agrees to not tell her brother about her whereabouts. Will Sebastian actually leave the next morning? And, if he does, will he keep silent about Adrielle and her castle or will he tell people about where she is? And will Adrielle remain at the castle or will she eventually leave for one reason or another? I’m 2 chapters into this book so far; and the story is very intriguing, the characters are great, and I’m interested to find out what happens next! I highly recommend this book, and look forward to reading more of it!"
ENJOYABLE!
"Can"t believe it's written by a 13 year old! When I was your age I was just writing diary 🥹 but here you are making a fairytale with king, castle, and some family drama stuff! I like the author's writing style, seriously, it is so engaging and easy to read! Even the grammar seems okay (though I am not native so I am not reliable in this!) But so far no major mistakes that make reading experience feel disturbed. In fact it is the opposite, I enjoy it a lot until suddenly I reach the end of the chapter! With a better spacing this story will be read better, Maddy!:) so the words will not feel too compacted and will be seen even greater! Goodluck girl!♡"
Excellent start!
"Keep in mind that this new author is 13 years old. Excellent start to this book. You have a firm grasp of your characters. There is a lot of room for the characters to grow. Your technical skills are on point for your age. You will learn more throughout high school. Don't be discouraged. You write better than many grown adults. I encourage you to talk with your English teacher or watch some writing tutorials on YouTube. I'm 47 years old, and I still watch the tutorials! You are off to an amazing start! I bet many of us wish we had started at 13. I look forward to watching this book grow. Please don't give up. You have a gift!"
