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Fantastic

"I love it. It's so captivating. Please write more. I hope this isn't it. I hope you write more and maybe even included up to James and Lily's death. But this is fantastic. I've recommend it to anyone I know who lives HP "

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please there has to be more

"I hope that there will be more chapters added to this this is way too short. add more tothis year and then maybe add an epilog of how they got married 5 chapter is toooooooooo short. I like this because all the characters are awesome but lily us sort of a jerk in the first few years"

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Amazing

"Please keep writing!!!!! I love this so much!!!! It's one of the best fanfics I've read. Please let this not be the end!!"

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awesome

"pleasssseeeeee tell me this is not the end that you are still writing? i love this and its amazing i wanna keep reading please let me know if you post another chapter. i want to read it. thank you and great job"

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