Philosopher’s Stone

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Summary

A short scene of something I made and I just want a review from anyone to see how to keep going please read it. P.S. This is not a Harry Potter Fanmade just forgot about the title

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

First scene

After a long ass trip we decided it would be best for us to get some rest.


“Damn it Zar we just traveled a day and a half the opposite way” said Bowie.


I looked at them frustrated but i was more intrigued by the sapphire crystal more than anything… “It’s ok Bowie, we’ll catch up to the rest of…”


Being interrupted a loud whistle could be heard coming from outside the camp “TWISH” a bunch of arrows started falling into the camp yet missing all 4 of us there.


“Run Charlotte don’t look back, run now!!!!!!!!!!” Screamed Zar while he was running behind Charlotte and Bowie.


As we ran the sapphire started shining and the stone started talking “You Idiots there was a tunnel”


“What in the hell did this stone just say” I thought but the fear of a arrow hitting me I kept running


We ran for about a hour and then the stone spoke again “Here go down here…” there was no road or trail so I was lost on where to go. I didn’t care about the talking stone and neither did my crew.


A loud scream came from the stone “You dumbasses run to the left from the tree with the heart on it… how did you find me and not somebody smarter”