Customize readability
Aa

Tension

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Running scared can also mean crawling scared.

Genre
Horror
Author
jjpatch
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Tension

I knew I as in trouble when alI I could see is me, my body, rummaging around on the floor looking for my eyes.

I’m on all fours, my mouth wide, uttering sounds I cannot hear, with my hands erratically patting across the carpet.

Yet I can feel air, cold air, rushing into my sockets heightening my anxiety and pain; striking against nerve endings and what I assume is my brain.

I don’t see blood, but I do see a yellow liquid just below my eyes.

I can’t direct my body here under a chair.

Frantically I search. Sweat beads on my brow.

I need my eyes.

I need my body.

How did this happen?

Oh yes, I remember. I remember now because I can see him.

I can see the figure shrouded in shadow hovering over my back, axe in his left hand.

He removed my eyes.

He plucked them out with a fork.

Let jjpatch know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

. Apostasy .  A  Luna's  Struggle

PappaBearZ: What a contrast; a tale of a good loving person willing to do what is necessary for the benefit of others contrast against a person bent on evil just for self gratification. A well written story that deserves to be read and shared.

Read Now
Das Blut der Krähe

Madeleine: Danke für die mal etwas andere Vampirgeschichte. Es war von allem etwas dabei (Erotik, Thrill, viel Blut und vor allem Spannung) Die Geschichte hat mich von Beginn an gefesselt. Die Spannungsbögen von Kapitel zu Kapitel waren super und die Handlungen nachvollziehbar. Kleiner Hinweis: Rückblicke vie...

Read Now
Into the Wilderness

Bubbles: Loved the entire story, it is well-written and engaging. I would recommend this book to anyone looking for a werewolf fantasy that's as much realistic as fantasy, very interesting and well thought out. I think it deserves 5 stars for the plot and execution of the story. Would absolutely love to see ...

Read Now
The Vendeleer Brothers

Lynne: This was a different read for me but enjoyable .don't think I will ever read anything like this book again.disturbing in places but a good read if you like stories about ghosts

Read Now
Glombies

cat_dancing: This is a very good story. I appreciate you keeping the cursing and the sex to a minimal. I hope you finish it. Thanks! Ruby

Read Now
Lycan Soulmates #3: The Lycan of Wisteria Falls [18+]

joasia4: A huge awesomeness of twisted and I loved it♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥

Read Now
Vampyre | Book I of Bloodlines

Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...

Read Now
Fairy Dust

chimene: Another great book, here's to the second one in the series x

Read Now