What is your opinion?
Review of A Little Piece of Heaven (Street Code)
"Fantastic! I love the addition in the beginning of Jadestreak breaking into the vault. It gives the story a more in depth feel to it about how he got the orb to begin with. More adventure also! At least that's what I believe. Your story is coming along nicely and I believe you could make it into a really and truly beautiful piece of work."
Review of 'Street Code"
"I found that Street Code was a very well written and good story. I really like the characters names, and that Jadestreak was pretty well developed. The grammar and punctuation were pristine, and the writers writing style is very well developed. The plot did feel a bit rushed at the end, but was overall very good. This story deserve more votes. :) Keep it up, awesomeartist! -Wolf_girl39"
Just a few words...
""Street Code" is an excellent preview of what is sure to be a great work. Though it's short you get a clear picture into the word the author is developing. However, I was a little thrown off by the pacing and structure. You seem to be thrown into the action in the middle only to have the character explain what happened in the beginning making the plot seem a little rushed and contrived. Technically I think this piece could use some tweaking. There's quite a bit of repeated words and phrases as well as some strange sentence structure that gives it a rough quality. But overall I really enjoyed reading and taking in the vivid imagery of both the characters and the landscape.."
Street Cred
"The short work found here is a quaint, sweet piece with a dark spin. We've seen this trope before: a poor hero takes pity on his/her fellow civilians. However, "Street Code" takes it to a new level by adding ghosts. I found the fast pace to be absorbing, but yearned to hear what was left behind. The author refers to the robbery of a bank, but does not actually transport us to the location. As a teaser, this chapter works, yet I crave the substance that would make the events of the current piece meaningful. I am also unsure of the amount of technical skill this writer has. Repetitive phrases, strange imagery, and odd word choice made reading difficult. "Baubles" especially threw me, as the connotation indicates a mundane or useless item. The concept, though, seems solid, and, much like "The Sixth Sense," I find myself wanting Jadestreak to continue his good work with the deceased and living alike."
