Far Floating Songbirds by Owel at Inkitt
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Far-Floating Songbirds

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Summary

Two mourning sea animals grieve together.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Owel
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Widowed Wilderness

A small willet wallows between the willow trees, washing its wings and underbelly.

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A giant gar grieves beside the grave, green garden.

Dreading the driftwood, he steers awayโ€ฆ and closes his eyes.

โ€ฆ

The small willet washes up to the gravelly gar. She admires the small arrowheads peeking from his jaw. She swims to his side. The water waves against his skin as the willet waddles closer. His eyes open. The willet steps onto his back. His eyes falter as he feels her soft flippers slap onto his scaly back.

He turns back to her.

The willet looks at him. His eyes follow her as she waddles onto his headโ€ฆ She ducks down, meeting his eyes upside-down.

They blink at each other, carrying quiet curiosity.

โ€ฆ


The gar surfs across the shoreline, with the willet resting on itโ€™s back.

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The willet wakes up, before the waning horizon melts from spotted blackโ€ฆ

...

โ€ฆto shining blue.

The gar gazes up at the small glowing scales.

โ€œDo you ever miss the stars when ours wakes up?โ€ the willet wonders.

โ€œNo,โ€ the gar responds.

โ€œWhy not?โ€

โ€œI swim to different stars every night.โ€

โ€œWoaaaah,โ€ the willet remarks, โ€œwhat do they feel like?โ€

The gar thinks.

โ€œSome are a bit sandy,โ€ he describes, โ€œMost of โ€˜em are really nice and rocky. A few have a bit oโ€™ brown and green on โ€™em.โ€

โ€œHow do you remember all of them?โ€ she asks.

โ€œThey were her favorite thing,โ€ he somberly recalls. โ€œAll I can do is remember.โ€

The two of them listen to the lonely toads, thrashing lilies and riding little waves.

โ€ฆ

The willet wiggles into the garโ€™s rough back.

โ€œWhat about you?โ€ the gar asks, โ€œDo you ever forget the stars?โ€

โ€œOh, all the time,โ€ she responds. โ€œBut that just makes it more amazing when I see them later.โ€

โ€œDoesnโ€™t forgetting make it worse?โ€

โ€œNot for me.โ€ The willet rolls onto her back. โ€œForgetting something just means you get to see them more than once.โ€

The gar looks to her.

โ€œBut everyoneโ€™s more upset about the fact that I forgot them.โ€

The gar looks back down.

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โ€œPerhaps, you just need someone to remember that you forget.โ€

โ€œPerhapsโ€ฆโ€ she mutters.

โ€ฆ

Her eyes flutter shut.

โ€ฆ

โ€œPerhapsโ€ฆโ€

He wonders.

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A soft silicate scent fills the foggy air. The willet wakes up.

โ€œWhatโ€™s that awful smell?โ€ she asks.

โ€œSoot,โ€ he responds.

โ€œWhatโ€™s that?โ€

โ€œThe leftover pieces of melted, fallen stars.โ€

โ€œWoaaaah.โ€

She takes a deep breath, admiring the smell.

โ€œWhere are they coming from?โ€

He turns towards a massive hill; it slopes from the lush green ocean border to the viny dirt crawling up to the base of a huge plume of dark gray ash. โ€œJust over there,โ€ he answers.

โ€œWoaaaah.โ€

โ€ฆ

โ€œWhy are they melted? I thought stars only fell.โ€

โ€œThey melt because they get closer to us.โ€

โ€œOhhhhโ€ฆ But how do they end up in our air?โ€ she asks.

โ€œWell, the Earth takes a big breath of the stars!-โ€

The willet breathes in!

โ€œAnd blows it back into our air.โ€

The willet blows out, coughing a little.


They arrive at the volcanoโ€™s forest-green shore. The willet alights from the gar, allying with the alloyed island.

The gar watches the willet smile and sprawl into the fresh foliage. He smiles.

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