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Three Ladies on a Holiday

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Summary

Mary has just turned twenty-one. As a birthday present, her rich uncles buys them a holiday in the luxuriuos resort of Queenscliff. She goes off with her sister, Clarissa and Aunt Gladys as chaperone for a very romantic weekend.

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Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

A birthday surprise


It was a dreary, rainy day when Mother entered the parlour and announced with a smile, “Look who’s come to visit us!”

A tall, distinguished man strode in, his presence commanding the room. The girls, young women really, leapt to their feet to welcome him with genuine warmth.


The young women were his nieces, Clarissa and Mary Holden. Mary, the youngest, had short, curly, light brown hair and sparkling blue eyes. She was slightly smaller than average and slightly plump, but her outgoing, energetic, and impulsive nature made her a joy to be around. Clarissa, one year older, had long, very dark brown hair and rich brown eyes that seemed to hold a world of secrets. She was taller and slimmer, with a shy, reserved demeanour that sometimes came across as cold, but those who knew her well understood her depth and kindness.


“Now, whose birthday is it today?” asked Uncle Albert, their late father’s very wealthy brother, with a twinkle in his eye.

“Mine,” said Mary, her voice filled with excitement.

“And mine,” added Clarissa, her tone more subdued but no less pleased. By a twist of fate, both women were born on the same day, one year apart.

“But who has just turned the magical age of twenty-one?” teased Uncle Albert.

“I have, Uncle Albert,” said Mary, trying hard to contain her excitement for she knew that while Uncle Albert was generous, he believed that a true lady is always in control of her emotions.


“Uncle Albert,” their mother interjected with a proud smile, “has a special treat for you both. He’s sending you to Queenscliff for a weekend holiday as a combined birthday present.”

Both girls squealed with delight and embraced Uncle Albert in a group hug.

“However,” their mother continued, “Aunt Gladys will accompany you as a chaperone.”

“But, Mama, we’re both over twenty-one. We don’t need a chaperone,” Mary protested, while Clarissa nodded in agreement.

“I couldn’t care if you were thirty-one. You get a chaperone until you’re married. Aunt Gladys has graciously agreed to accompany you,” their mother insisted.

“B...but Aunt Gladys is so... mature,” stuttered Clarissa, diplomatically.

“She is forty, just two years older than me. Now, do you want to go or not? Your Uncle has arranged everything—tickets on the paddle steamer from Melbourne and luxurious rooms at the Queenscliff Hotel. Now, get packing. You must meet your aunt at the pier tomorrow morning.”


Meanwhile, Aunt Gladys, the woman in question, was also anticipating the weekend with a mix of excitement and trepidation. She was rather bored, having been unable to secure another position as a governess due to an unfortunate incident in her last post. The letter she held in her hands was a beacon of hope. Her sister had asked her to chaperone her two nieces on a holiday to Queenscliff, all expenses paid. She stood before her mirror, clad in her nightdress, and let it fall to the floor, revealing her still-youthful figure. She smiled at her reflection, a plan forming in her mind. She reached into her wardrobe and pulled out a pretty summer dress, twirling with a newfound sense of purpose. Perhaps this weekend, she thought, she might find a gentleman who would appreciate her charms.


On the other side of town, two friends, Freddie and Jack, were enjoying a pint at their local pub. They had been inseparable since childhood, their bond forged through mischief and the occasional stolen girlfriend during their teenage years. Their fathers worked together at the tin can factory, and their mothers were close friends, raising large families in which Freddie and Jack were the eldest. Now, they worked side by side as sales clerks at Macmillan’s Clothing Store for gentlemen. Today, however, Jack had a secret to share—a hot tip on the upcoming horse race.


Freddie and Jack were an odd pair. Freddie was stocky and muscular, a force to be reckoned with on the rugby field and in the boxing ring. He occasionally played soccer and had a magnetic personality that drew people to him, especially women. Yet, he was cautious in his romantic pursuits, ensuring that no one was hurt by his actions. He was content with his life as a sales clerk, not seeing the need for ambition beyond his current station.


Jack, on the other hand, was tall and slim, with a lean athleticism that made him a formidable tennis player, sprinter, and swimmer. He was the more intelligent of the two, with a strategic mind that served him well in both his personal relationships and his career aspirations. He was serious about his girlfriends, often forming deep connections that, while sometimes ending in heartbreak, were always meaningful. Jack saw a future beyond the tin can factory; he attended night college to study management, dreaming of one day running Macmillan’s.


As they sipped their beers, Jack revealed his insider knowledge about the upcoming race. “Freddie, this is it. A sure thing. My dad’s jockey friend says some shady characters are planning to sabotage the Grey Stallion. He’s the favourite to win, but Little Runner is going to take the lead.”

“Blimey, Jack. Little Runner’s an outsider at ten to one,” Freddie exclaimed, his eyes wide with disbelief.

“And I’m putting every penny I have on him,” Jack declared, his resolve unwavering.


Race day arrived, and the two friends stood at the rails, the energy of the crowd palpable. Jack waved his betting slip at Freddie, a grin plastered across his face.

“You’re either brave or completely mad, Jack,” Freddie chuckled, shaking his head.

The starting gun cracked, and the horses burst from the stalls. The favourite surged ahead, with Little Runner trailing behind. As they rounded the final bend, the favourite faltered, his stride uneven and laboured. Little Runner seized the moment, galloping past the injured horse to claim victory.


The crowd erupted in a cacophony of cheers and jeers, the air thick with the scent of victory and defeat. Jack’s face lit up like a beacon as he clutched his winning ticket.

“I won a thousand! Can you believe it, Freddie?” he shouted over the din.

“What are you going to do with all that money?” Freddie asked, still in shock.

“I’m giving half to mum and with the rest we’re going to Queenscliff for the weekend. I’m buying us tickets on the paddle steamer and suites at the fabulous Queenscliff Hotel,” Jack announced, his excitement contagious.


In the heart of the city, Marcus Gray was engaged in a heated discussion with his brother.

“I can’t leave Lilian this weekend. She needs her physical therapy sessions,” Marcus argued, his voice tinged with desperation.

“Marcus, you’ve hired a team of therapists for Lilian. You need a break. If you don’t take care of yourself, you’ll end up in the hospital,” his brother countered, his concern evident.

Marcus slumped into a chair, the weight of his world pressing down on him. Since Lilian’s stroke four years prior, he had spiralled into a deep depression, eventually resigning from his position to care for her. Yet, the private hospital had taken over her care, leaving him adrift in a sea of self-pity and loneliness.

“The tickets are paid for, Marcus. If you don’t use them, you’ll have wasted my money and your chance for a respite,” his brother urged.

“Fine, I’ll go,” Marcus conceded, his voice barely a whisper.


Alone, Marcus poured himself a Scotch and collapsed onto the sofa, his future looming before him like a dark, desolate landscape. The doctors had been clear: Lilian would never recover, her body a shell of its former self, her mind trapped within. He could have divorced her, but his honour and the vows he had made held him captive. He took a long swig of the Scotch, the liquid fire burning a path to his despair.


As the rain continued to fall outside, the lives of these individuals were about to intersect in the charming coastal town of Queenscliff. Unbeknown to them, the weekend would bring surprises, revelations, and the possibility of new beginnings.


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nice to read the different lives to come together on that trip

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