What is your opinion?
The Rise of Nyx
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Watch the darkness
"Only tiny little errors mar the face of this dark beautiful tale of one beginning of the early Earthly realm. The beauty in literal words pull you into the story of Nyx. The wonder and the tiny pin drops of trepidation sooth you as you slowly under the spell of the writer. "
Wow! Movie material!
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A worthy read
"Nyx’s demons is a captivating story with beautiful imagery and a storyline full of nothing but potential. Though there were only seven chapters I found the characters to be intriguing and their interactions between each other to be just as curious. Even if you are familiar with the relationship between the Greek gods the developing plot as well as the character Nyx still opens up a new story that can't quite be guessed at. The recommendations I have for the author is to be sure the directions you give the characters are clear about how is doing what. Also make sure that the plot is not rushed. I did think that it was at first, but only because I thought the story was going to be one of a girl with finding out or rediscovering who she really is. However, I am not disappointed because the way the story is going now opens up great possibilities for the plot that most people would expect in a sequel. I can't wait to see where the author takes this story."
Love it
"How you created the story and the characters is amazing. In my opinion, I would look back at what you have and read over the sentences to make sure that there are no extra words and that it makes sense. Also I think that when you brought in Nick in the last chapter, to put 3 stars (***) to show that it is a new idea and someone else is speaking. The story line sounds awesome and I would love to read more of it."
The rise of Nyx
"I like that one can feel the story. The descriptive energy brought out in every chapter was magnificent. betrayal was not intended."
Interesting writing
"The book is quite interesting because of his unique concept.The characters are also been well described and are developing well. Keep up your good work!"
Appealing
"Great start, makes the audience want to keep reading on."
Interesting Concept
"The concept of Nyx's Demons is very good. The execution, however, needs polish. At seven chapters at this point, it's difficult to see any real plot structure. The characters are becoming better developed as the story continues, the setting is interesting, and the sub plot between Nyx and Giai is beginning to gel. It's too soon to determine the theme, if any. That all being said, it's a worth the read and I expect the writing to become more sophisticated as time goes by. Technically, the writing is somewhat difficult. The sentences lack the proper use of commas. English is a very flexible, but unforgiving language. Pick up a copy of Eats Shoots and Leaves to explore what happens when we aren't careful with punctuation. I saw one reviewer recommended a grammar program. Don't rely too heavily on them. Your best bet would be to compose in one word processor, say MS Word, then export it to another, like Corel WordPerfect. As each program has completely different set of tools, they will each pick out different things that will help you with your writing."
I think this will be a great story when finished.
"I'm curious as to how a high school student, Nicole, ended up with no parents, millions in the bank, a literal mansion and the goddess of darkness, all in 4 chapters. Hopefully the writer will enlighten us as to how this happened in future chapters. I have given overall story and plot 3 stars, as I do not as yet know what the plot is or where the story is going. I gave 4 stars to writing style and 4* to writing skills, because some sentences have extra words and words like feet instead of feat are used. All in all I think this will be a great story when finished."
