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Los habitantes de Ascur esperaban con ansias la culminación del Cristal que les daría la curación de diversas enfermedades y padecimientos. Valderium, químico notable en el planeta, trabajaba en él arduamente hasta que estuvo culminado. Sin embargo, la envidia y el deseo de poder cegaron los ojos de un hombre, quien en sus planes para alcanzarlo terminó con la vida de su gobernante, culpando así a Valderium por este acto y enviándolo lejos. ¿Recuperará Valderium su honor? ¿Será más fuerte el amor o el odio? Portada hecha en Canva.
A mi primo Chris, con mucho cariño.
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