"Thorns Of Loyalty" by tosarkastikomouegw at Inkitt
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"Thorns of Loyalty"

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Summary

In the crumbling kingdom of Elarith, where alliances are forged with blood and shattered with whispers, Lady Elira trusted only one soul—her childhood friend and sworn protector, Kael. But when her family is slaughtered in a midnight coup and she’s branded a traitor to the crown, Elira is forced into exile, haunted by a single truth: it was Kael who opened the gates. Now, with vengeance burning in her veins and a new identity, Elira returns to the court that betrayed her... not as a victim, but as its reckoning.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Whisper Before the Blade

The halls of House Virel burned with candlelight and deceit. Elira moved through the stone corridors in silence, her silk gown trailing behind like a shadow. Her father’s war council had just ended—tension hung in the air like smoke, thick and choking. Only Kael remained behind, watching her with those familiar storm-gray eyes. The same eyes that had once promised her safety beneath the blood oath tree.


“You’re shaking,” he said, stepping closer.


“No,” she replied. “I’m waking up.”


That night, she awoke to screams. Steel against flesh. Footsteps in the corridor. Her mother’s perfume smothered by smoke. And in the chaos, she saw him—Kael—standing beside the assassin king, blade drawn, eyes unreadable.


She didn’t scream. She ran.

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