Stuck In The Immortal World by Star at Inkitt
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Stuck In The Immortal World

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Summary

A girl named Lune. Who gets stuck in the immortal world and faces many challenges to escape. Read the chapters to find out. Will she escape? Will she stay in the immortal world? See yourself

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Star
Status
Complete
Chapters
12
Rating
5.0 5 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1 : The Magical Stone

Note: This books characters are: Lune = She has brown curly hair and green eyes. 23 years old, She hates studying and loves adventures she also loves jewels and diamonds.

Lunes Mother= She has brown curly hair and hazel eyes. 51 years old

Lunes Father=He has brown hair and green eyes. 53 years old

Princess Livie= Blonde hair with blue eyes. 21 years old, Loves books and baking

Prince Noah = Brown hair with hazel eyes. 25 years old, is a serious person.

Kai = Blonde hair with blue eyes. 22 years old, likes to make jokes.

King Eldore = Brown hair with hazel eyes. 53 years old.

Queen Moon = Blonde hair with blue eyes. 51 years old.


One day, it was 7 in the morning.

Knock-knock-knock. "Come in!" Lune yelled in her sleep.

The door opened as Lunes mother stepped inside her room.

"Lune sweet heart wake up!, your going to be late for university!" She yelled.

"I'm waking up mother please turn of the lights!" Lune replied as she started snoring once again. "Okay fine! It's your choice if you don't wake up in ten minutes no brownies for you after your classes!" Lunes mother said as she stepped outside the door back towards the kitchen.

Lune did a huge yawn as she got off of her bed. She wore her white bunny slippers and started walking towards the bathroom. She grabbed her purple toothbrush and started brushing her teeth.

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Lune ran down the stairs and sat down with her mother and father for breakfast.

"Good morning mum and dad" Lune said.

"Good morning sweet heart" Lune's parent replied.

Lune started eating her waffles when her father said "Lune dear, Don't you have an exam today?"

Lune dropped her fork on the table and said " Yeah, so about that... I might of forgotten to study.."

"Lune! It's not a joke! This is a exam sweetie not a normal thing! Your failing your exams so much this year already!" Lune's mother yelled.

Lune said sorry and quickly packed her bag. She went to her bus. As soon as she reached her class. She quickly went and sat down on the chair. Oh no! I forgot to bring my pen!. She thought to herself.

As she saw a girl sitting right next to her.

"Psstt! Excuse me, Can I have a pen to borrow from you please?" Lune whispered to the girl.

The girl looked at Lune weirdly and gave her a pen.

Once Lune got the pen she began to write on her exam paper.

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Lune got up from her chair and gave the test paper to the teacher and grabbed her back pack. She started walking towards her house when she saw a baby bunny that looked like she had not eaten any thing for a while. "Oh you poor little thing!" Lune yelled in disbelief. She quickly grabbed her lunch box which had carrots in them that Lune didn't finish. She gave those carrots to the bunny and the bunny started eating all of them.

Once she gave her food to the bunny. She started to walk back towards her house. On her way she saw a shiny, glowly and sparkly rainbow gem. She was so memorized of that gem that she felt a connection with it. She felt like it was calling for her. She quickly picked it up before any one could take it from her and she placed it in her bag very carefully and slowly so that it wouldn't break.

Finally she reached to her house. She ran upstairs to her room and began to investigate and examine the beautiful colorful gem.

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Ji don't know you can tell me which one I should review

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Very interesting start so far. Has caught my interest!

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