Say Please

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Summary

Say Please is a poetic surrender to control, craving, and the quiet desperation that lives under lace. This isn’t romance—it’s a power exchange. One whispered word at a time. In these dark, intimate verses, Eliana finds herself bound not just by ropes or fabric, but by the way Joseph sees her—completely. Through midnight glances, pulled hair, and undone buttons, their bond deepens into something primal, something sacred. Pleasure becomes ritual. Restraint becomes the language they speak fluently, hands and mouths writing scripture on skin. This is not a love story. It’s a collection of moments you’re not supposed to talk about. But you will. You’ll beg to.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Before the Show

black fishnets

stretched like tension—

up my thighs,

under a skirt

too soft

to stop him


his Planet Zero hoodie

hung off my shoulders

like a borrowed constellation,

smelling like sweat,

bass,

and whatever spell

he always wears

behind his teeth


my belly peeked

from the tight black shirt—

half defiance,

half offering


he was already undone—

pants at his ankles,

hands on my waist

like he’d been waiting

his whole life

to pull me

into a corner of the universe

with no setlist

and no rules


his breath

hit the back of my neck

like rhythm—

soft,

low,

rising with the crowd outside

as we moved

to a beat

that was only ours


and in that half-dressed gospel,

before the stage lights,

before the music—

he made the concert start

with his mouth

on my pulse