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Soul between seconds

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Summary

The people between ticks

Genre
Other
Author
Laju
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 3

The red sand in the hourglass poured upward, defying gravity, as if rewinding the blood of time itself.


Elira didn’t breathe. She couldn’t.


The moment stretched until it folded in on itself, and suddenly, she was back in her kitchen—but not quite. Everything was tinted in grey, like color had been drained from the world. The ticking watch lay on the floor, no longer floating. The hum of the refrigerator was gone. The air was too still.


And then she saw them.


People—dozens of them—just standing. In the corners. In the hallway. In reflections. Not moving. Not blinking. Transparent, but real. Like echoes from a future or remnants of a past that didn’t happen.


The Soul Between Seconds.


That phrase hit her like a forgotten memory crashing through the fog.


A whisper tugged at her spine:

"They are the ones who remember too much."


She turned—and the stranger was beside her again.


“Elira,” he said, her name crumbling like ash in his mouth. “You’re slipping through.”


“What are they?” she asked, pointing toward the motionless echoes.


“People who stepped out of time and never made it back. Some were looking for answers. Others… were simply late.”


She stared. “Late?”


“For what?”


He handed her a folded piece of paper, shaking slightly.


She opened it.


A photograph. Grainy. Sepia-toned. A girl—her, barely twelve—standing beside a boy with dark eyes and a smile full of sunlight.


She dropped it. “I don’t remember this.”


The stranger’s voice was lower now, heavier:

“But he remembers you.”


A clock somewhere chimed—only once—but it echoed like thunder.


The kitchen snapped back into color. The people vanished. The watch was gone.


Elira stood alone, the photograph still at her feet.


But something had changed.


The calendar on the wall now read: May 21, 2024.


She had lost an entire year.

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