Hleo

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I didnt like it, I LOVED IT.

"Seriously this is amazing and im actually pretty late to this story but its really the best "

I need a sequel

"Loved it where is the sequel??"

Yaaaaas Girl!

"I like the characters and I love the idea that every decision has an effect whether it be world changing or simple. The writing style makes it so easy to picture in my head. Great job! I hope there will be more "

Fantabulous!

"Really love this book. Can't wait for more😍"

Love this!

"All I can say is WOW! This story captivated me. This author is especially good at building a plot that can be carried through multiple novels and I can’t wait to read more! Well done 🤗"

Hleo

"I love the concept and the plot! Sometimes it seems kinda slow in the beginning but the information and the action start pounding in. I loved it cant wait for the next read!!!"

Great storyline

"Thoroughly enjoyable couldn't out it down can't wait to see what happens next"

Hleo

"Beautiful. Magical. Addicting. That’s all I can describe this book, as.✨"

LOVED IT!

"I loved everything about the book, the plot was awesome and had me at the edge of my seat. Cannot wait for book two to come out!"

Hleo

"I love the suspense in this book. I love how this book wraps me around its pinkie... "

SUPERB!

"Okay, first and foremost, I had read pretty a lot of contemporary romance(YA and Teenfic) and so I decided to move in on Fantasy(Fantasy and Scifi is my thing right now.) before and finally came to the point on seeing it as boring since a lot of writers give that cliche scenes that comes to not be that realistic, but this Novel, just as when I though I was totally done for Contemporary romance came into my view. The mix of emotions, the elements and the writing style of the author made this a superb work! Other than some minor paragraph mistakes (in which the sentence got cut up and brought into another line), I've got nothing to say more of this book. Big Thumbs up for the Author! I'll be looking out for your other books! I'm now a fan of yours!"

These mary

"It is a really lovely book I hope it continues to be. I also hope that this book has a good ending. Finger close. "

Amazing!!!

"Love the book😍💕"

Super compelling!

"I only read the first chapter, but I plan on reading the rest sometime. It was a little slow at first, but at the end some things started to pick up and left me with a few questions, compelling me to read more. Plus the grammar/spelling is nice, and I also really like how fleshed out the characters are. I can't wait to see what the rest of the story holds. :)"

Great job!

"Hey! This is actually pretty good. I read the first chapter, and I'm already super interested. Great plot, too! I love it. Keep up with the great work, Rebecca."

HLeo

"I've only read a little but so far I love it!! Its soooo good. Its keeping me on my toes. Keep writing."

Ileo

"I'm not sure of the title here. I though the book was extremely well written. You're a terrific writer. I didn't read the last few chapters but got the drift of the book. That said, the subject matter didn't interest me. It was sad. Perhaps you could have started with the guy coming into the store and being interested. Perhaps you could say some funny romantic lines and have more of a dialogue, such as. I thought, "What a hunk. I could be interested in him.:" Sentences like that, Or, "Just looking at him excited me. I was love at first sight." I agree with the other review. The first lines are very important, Get the reader interested. Then later on you can have a flashback on what happened in your home life, but people don't want to know the details of unpleasant events. I'm trying to be helpfu.l. Your grammer, technique and writing style are amazing. Just make the story more interesting. Good luck on this and maybe you can edit it. Sylvia Galactic: The Superhuman Robot"

Charming...

"This story was very charming although I would prefer a bit more dynamic action in the book. Sometimes chapters dragged about an uninteresting subject but overall it was really interesting and intriguing story to read. The plot was okay and the characters are very likable and seem really realistic which is a good thing. Keep on writing because your writing style is amazing and in a near future, I hope this book will get published. Don't give up."

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