Ashes Of Jeff by MICHAEL C at Inkitt
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ASHES OF JEFF

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Summary

Ashes of Jeff is a dark, supernatural urban revenge tale about Jeff Carter — a community activist and father whose family is murdered during a violent raid by corrupt forces. Betrayed by the system he fought to reform, Jeff dies but refuses heaven’s call for forgiveness. Instead, he makes a Faustian bargain with the Devil to return as something more than human — a demon forged from vengeance. Reborn with ash in his veins and fire in his eyes, Jeff hunts down the powerful architects of injustice: corrupt police, politicians, and profiteers who exploit the poor and silence dissent. His return inspires fear among the elites and reverence among the oppressed, who see him as both monster and reckoning. Amari, a young activist inspired by Jeff’s past life, joins him — trying to tether what’s left of his humanity to his original purpose: justice, not blind destruction. But Jeff’s war attracts stronger enemies. Senator Wolfe, a sinister power broker, unleashes Judah Cain — an unstoppable mercenary — to hunt Jeff down. As Jeff’s crusade escalates, he confronts the limits of his soul and the true price of his pact. To gain more power to face his enemies, he sacrifices the last fragments of his humanity, transforming fully into a legend of ruin — a plague on the corrupt, but no longer the man his family loved.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

PROLOGUE


The clock read 3:07 a.m. when Jeff Carter died.

Outside, the city slumbered under a blanket of indifference. Sirens in the distance howled like ghosts passing through concrete canyons, but here, in the quiet of Eastgate’s south side, the only sound was the low hum of a fan oscillating above Jeff’s head. His daughter, Lila, was asleep on his chest, breathing softly, the way children do when they feel safe.

Jeff had just finished telling her a story. Not the fairy tale kind, but one about the world—his world. About the marches, the speeches, the fights, the jail time, the nights spent building shelters for families evicted at midnight by the very system he had sworn to expose. He didn't tell her everything, but she knew enough to call her daddy a fighter.

In the kitchen, Lena washed the last dish, her reflection staring back at her from the darkened window. She caught her own eyes and smiled faintly. Peaceful moments like these came rarely in their household. There was always a battle somewhere—rent overdue, police harassment, politicians silencing dissent under laws written in blood.

But tonight felt still. Almost sacred.

Then the lights cut out.

Not just a flicker—total blackout. The fan stopped. The refrigerator hummed one final sigh and died. Jeff sat up, gently moving Lila to the couch. Lena stepped out of the kitchen, wiping her hands.

"Power’s out again?" she asked.

Jeff didn't answer. Something felt wrong.

He moved to the window. Across the street, the Simmons’ porch light flickered. Then—dark. Every house on the block blinked out one by one like a row of candles snuffed by an invisible wind.

Then the low rumble came. Tires on gravel. Heavy engines. Multiple. A convoy.

Jeff’s pulse quickened. He reached under the couch for the baseball bat. He didn’t own a gun—he never trusted them in a house with children—but tonight, that decision felt suddenly naive.

Lena moved quickly, grabbing their son, Isaiah, from his crib. Lila began to stir.

Then the door exploded.

Not kicked in—blown open. The force of the blast threw Jeff against the wall. Smoke filled the room. Red lasers sliced through the haze. Shapes moved like phantoms: tall, armored, faceless.

“GET ON THE GROUND!” they shouted. “HANDS WHERE I CAN SEE—”

Gunfire.

Lena screamed.

Jeff watched his family fall like shadows.

He tried to crawl to them. He was screaming something—he wasn’t sure what. A voice barked, "We have movement," and then the world shattered.

Everything went silent.

There was no pain. No light. No tunnel. Only a weightless kind of drifting.

Then a voice—not loud, but thunderous nonetheless.

"You are here, Jeff Carter."

He opened his eyes and found himself standing—not floating, not lying, but standing—in a space that was not space. A desert of stars stretched infinitely above him, and beneath his feet was water that didn’t ripple. It was still, as if time had held its breath.

In the distance, a figure appeared. A man—but not a man. He wore no crown, carried no sword, and yet Jeff knew it was God. The presence pulsed with a weight he couldn’t define.

Jeff tried to speak, but no words came. His throat burned with grief.

God raised a hand. "You have suffered."

Jeff trembled. "My wife. My kids. They—they—"

"Were taken. By those who fear your voice."

Silence again.

Jeff’s fists clenched. “Then give me justice.”

God’s eyes—if they were eyes—dimmed. “Justice and vengeance are not the same. What you seek is blood.”

"What they took from me—! They destroyed my family! I won’t forgive that."

God’s voice was steady. “Vengeance destroys the heart. Forgiveness saves the soul.”

Jeff turned his back.

"Then I don’t want my soul."

And he walked away.

Through storms of light, through memories distorted by agony, through time itself—Jeff fell. But not into hell. Not yet.

He walked a long road through shadows until a new presence greeted him. This one wore a grin, sharp as glass. A being clothed in obsidian smoke, with a voice like velvet soaked in venom.

"So, the righteous man walks out on heaven," the Devil purred. "How rare. How deliciously rare."

Jeff stood tall. “Can you give me the power to kill them? All of them—the politicians, the cowards, the liars who smile while they crush the poor?”

"And what would you trade, martyr of the murdered?"

"My soul. My eternity. My name."

The Devil's grin widened.

"Done."

And fire consumed him.

Not flames of pain—but of transformation. Bone cracked. Skin darkened to ash. Eyes turned red like dying stars. Horns erupted from his skull. Wings tore from his back like vengeance given form.

Jeff Carter died again that day.

And something darker was born.

He would walk the earth not as man, nor ghost, but as a reckoning.

They would call him a monster. Demon. Murderer.

But to the broken and betrayed, he would be something else.

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