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Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue: The first meeting

The rain hit the Suzuka Circuit like bullets on carbon fiber. Visibility was low, grip was worse, and yet—championship points were on the line.

Ammar Riaz, the young hotshot from Pakistan, sat P2 behind the reigning world champion, Lucas Vinter of Denmark. This was their last battle of the season. Whoever crossed the line first would win the championship.

Lap 52. Final lap. The rain poured 30 harder.

Vinter’s Mercedes weaved defensively through the first sector, his rear lights flashing furiously. Ammar’s Red Bull danced behind him, perfectly balanced, but on the edge of traction. Engineers screamed in their ears—but neither driver listened. They only heard the engine, the rain, and their heartbeat.

At 130R—one of the fastest corners in Formula 1—Ammar braked late, impossibly late. Everyone on the pit wall stood up.

He went side-by-side with Vinter, barely missing the wet curb.

Contact. Sparks. But both cars held steady.

Down to the Casio Triangle, Vinter dived to defend. Ammar feinted left, cut right, and squeezed through with millimeters to spare.

Checkered flag.

Ammar Riaz crossed the line just 0.073 seconds ahead—becoming the first ever Pakistani F1 World Champion.

The world erupted.

And Lucas Vinter? He didn’t wave. He didn’t smile.

He just muttered into the radio:

“Tell him the fight isn’t over.”

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