Duskfall: The Three Societies by justmine at Inkitt
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DUSKFALL: THE THREE SOCIETIES

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Summary

In a scenario where the three opposing forces, namely the Crimson Flame, the Silver Order, and the Shadow Veil, are at balance, peace is nothing more than a very deluding aspect. Seraphine Valen, who is the product of light and darkness, is a keeper of a secret that can bring about the end for all. She is called a half-human and is wanted by the Societies, so she takes refuge in the city of Astralis which is divided into different loyalties and where loyalty is a currency and truth is a weapon. With the assassins' attacks and war stirs underneath the surface, Seraphine comes upon a prophecy that is entailed with blood and silence, one which calls her the Daughter of Dusk and Dawn, the one who is to end the age of balance. When betrayal, love, and sacrifice overlap, she is left to decide between the world that has been terrified of her and the tempest that is growing inside her. However, in a city that is predicated on falsehoods, even the brightness can produce a perilous shadow. When the new day comes, it might be blood that has done the painting.

Status
Complete
Chapters
30
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: Whispers at Dusk

The last colors of daylight bled into the horizon, painting Astralis in streaks of fire and ash. At twilight, the city always seemed to hold its breath, as if caught in a pause between heartbeats. Towers of steel and glass caught the fading light like fractured mirrors, their shadows spilling long across the cracked pavement.

The upper districts gleamed with neon signs that buzzed even before true night arrived. Vendors hawked late meals from stalls where steam curled into the dusky air, while streetcars screeched on rusting rails. Children darted between alleys chasing makeshift toys, their laughter brittle in the cooling air. Yet beyond the noise and color, Astralis bore scars: collapsed buildings sealed off by caution tape, blackened walls where fires had once burned too hot to smother.

To outsiders, the city was alive, bustling, endless. To Seraphine Valen, it was something else entirely.

She walked quickly, her hood pulled low, the hem of her coat brushing her boots. The crowd around her moved with practiced indifference, but to her every step felt magnified, as if the shadows themselves leaned closer. They stretched oddly when she passed, rippling like oil on water. More than once she had sworn she heard them whisper.

Her satchel strap dug into her shoulder as she adjusted it, fingers brushing the old leather as if reassurance could anchor her. The sound of footsteps echoed too sharply in her ears.

“Hey, slow down!”

Kaia Reyes caught her wrist with a firm tug, nearly making her stumble. Her friend’s voice, warm and exasperated, cut through the restless din of the street.

“You walk like you’re being chased,” Kaia muttered, pushing a few loose strands of auburn hair out of her eyes.

Seraphine forced a laugh, light and unconvincing. “Maybe I am.”

Kaia rolled her eyes, though her grip lingered before she let go. “You always say creepy stuff like that when the sun sets. Honestly, Sera, you’re too dramatic for your own good.”

“Or maybe you’re not cautious enough.”

The words slipped out sharper than intended. She softened her tone quickly, but her chest tightened. The truth was harder to carry at dusk—the voices sharper, the weight heavier.

It had become their routine. Kaia teasing, Seraphine deflecting. Kaia didn’t know about the whispers, or the way shadows bent toward her, sometimes curling at her feet like they longed to cling. Those were truths Seraphine had locked behind silence.

They turned onto a narrower street. The air shifted as they passed the skeleton of an old chapel, its roof collapsed inward, windows jagged teeth of broken glass. Chains bound the doors, rusted links clinking faintly in the evening wind. The bell tower, long silent, pointed skyward like an accusing finger.

Seraphine slowed without meaning to. The ruined structure hummed at the edge of her senses, not with sound exactly, but with vibration. Like a low, steady thrum beneath her ribs.

“Not this again.” Kaia tugged harder, her tone bordering on pleading. “It’s just a ruin, Sera. You keep staring at it like it’s going to start talking.”

Seraphine’s lips parted before she could stop herself. “What if it did?”

Kaia froze, then huffed, though her voice wavered slightly. “Then I’d run. And I’d drag you with me.”

A faint smile tugged at Seraphine’s mouth, but her gaze lingered on the chapel. She could almost feel the pull of unseen eyes watching from the shattered windows.

Before she could sink deeper into the sensation, a sharp whistle split the air.

“Oi! You two always take the long way home?”

Both girls turned.

Liam Caelum leaned casually against a lamppost, bag slung over his shoulder. His dark hair fell in unruly waves across his forehead, catching the faint glow of the neon sign behind him. He grinned—careless on the surface, though his eyes flicked constantly between corners and rooftops.

Kaia waved eagerly. “Liam! Heading back too?”

“Figured I’d catch up.” He pushed off the post and joined them, his gait easy. “You looked like you were about to vanish into the ruins.” His nod toward the chapel made Seraphine stiffen.

“It’s nothing,” she said quickly. “Just felt… strange, that’s all.”

“Strange is normal in Astralis.” Liam’s grin tilted sharper. “But don’t stare too long. Some places stare back.”

Kaia groaned, throwing her hands up. “Not you too! First Sera, now you? Please don’t feed her paranoia.”

“Paranoia keeps you alive,” Liam replied, voice light but layered with weight.

The three fell into step together, weaving through thinning crowds. Street vendors packed their carts, neon lights flared brighter, and distant sirens wailed through the night. For a moment, it felt almost ordinary—three students walking home, laughter and chatter masking the heavier silence beneath.

Seraphine kept her head lowered, though her senses prickled. She caught fragments of sound no one else seemed to notice: whispers threading through the noise, syllables brushing her thoughts.

Seraphine…

Her chest clenched. She glanced toward the dark slant of an alley, but nothing stirred. The shadows along the wall rippled unnaturally, her own among them, shifting like stirred liquid.

Her pulse jumped.

“Hey.” Kaia’s voice softened, catching the pallor in her face. “You okay?”

“I’m fine,” Seraphine lied, willing the word to steady her.

Liam’s gaze flicked to her, sharp and knowing. He said nothing, but the weight of his silence pressed heavier than Kaia’s concern.

They walked on until the streets grew brighter, safer. Vendors called last-minute offers, and the neon haze of the district washed over them. To anyone else, it was just another night. To Seraphine, it was a warning.

The city was calling her.

And deep down, she feared that one day soon… she would answer.


That night, when Seraphine finally closed her eyes, sleep came jagged and restless.

She stood once again before the chapel, its doors unchained, its windows whole. Shadows pulsed behind the glass like restless waves.

A voice, low and layered, rippled across the dreamscape. Half-blood. You cannot hide.

Her shadow stretched long, twisting, no longer her own but something darker, reaching.

She woke with a strangled gasp, sweat dampening her hairline. The whisper still echoed in her skull.

Astralis slept outside her window, unaware.

But Seraphine knew the city had marked her.

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I hope in Chapter 1 you amaze the way I wrote this. Happy reading and Enjoy.

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