Cardivores

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Summary

A serum grants perfect vitality but triggers a terrifying, primal hunger. Nicole and her friends embrace the change, realizing resistance means a swift, agonizing failure. To survive, they must forfeit their humanity and become something else. Now, the hunger has spread, and the Cardivores begin their sinister hunt.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

1

The penthouse always smelled of flowers, soft, but today the scent was heavy, almost sharp in its richness. Archer stood in the centre, taller, straighter, more alive than Nicole ever seen. Veins electric under his skin. Eyes glimmered. Manhattan buzzed with its usual chaos, but inside the apartment it was muted except for the pulse of life in Archer.

He held a tray of vials filled with thick purple liquid that caught the light like trapped blood.

“You look tired,” he said. “This fixes everything. No colds, hangovers, weakness. Perfect health. One vial each. That’s all it takes.”

Nadine leaned forward. Curiosity sparkled in her eyes. “You were gone a month. How do we know this is safe?”

Archer’s smile was calm, assured. “It’s incredible. I wanted to share this because life like this is better than anything you knew.”

Jessamine frowned. “And what exactly does it do?”

“Enhance you,” Archer said. “Your body works perfectly. Energy, clarity, vitality. Life feels sharper. You’ll enjoy it.”

Melody crossed her arms. “And you’re certain it’s reliable?”

Archer held up a vial. “I tested it. One vial each. It’s a gift. You choose.”

Jame shifted uncomfortably. “I don’t know, Archer…”

“You don’t have to,” Archer said. “It’s your choice. But I want you to see. It’s extraordinary.”

Nicole stared at the vials. The serum was metallic, thick, alive somehow. She glanced at her friends.

Archer passed the vials. One each.

Nadine drank. Her eyes widened. “Wow. I feel amazing.”

Jessamine shook her head. “I can’t. I just don’t know what this does.”

Melody hesitated, then drank. “Alright. Let’s see.”

Jame swallowed with a resigned sigh. “I trust you.”

Nicole held hers. Her fingers tightened around the glass. Finally, she drank. Metallic bitterness hit hard, yet sweet. Warmth spread throughout her chest. Sounds became clearer. Colours sharper Veins brighter.


The serum gave life a brutal edge. Its immediate strike was a metallic lightning, followed by a warmth that spread like a conquering tide. In a single breath, fatigue vanished. Illness became a forgotten concept. The body achieved silent efficiency. Every cell operated at peak performance.

A flicker beneath her skin, a vein twisting like molten wire, made Nicole flinch. Her body felt almost aware, bending toward a hunger she did not recognize as her own.

Colours burned bright. Sound arrived clean. Thought accelerated; clarity replaced doubt. The serum offered supremacy. She felt tall, resilient, and utterly alive. This was not a high; this was the optimized self, whole and magnificent. The perfection was undeniable.

Archer’s smile remained. “Nothing to fear.”

The days afterward were strange. Nadine moved constantly, manic. Archer was sharper, magnetic. Melody maintained routines, cleaning, but Nicole saw the faint glint in her eyes, something predatory. Jame followed Archer quietly, cautious. Jessamine, who refused the vial, stayed on the sidelines. Her anxiety was palpable.

Nicole felt the first hints of discomfort. Metallic tang lingered on. Hunger stirred for something primal. She balled her fists. A whiff of copper air drifted up from the streets below. Part of her wanted to taste, but another part was revolted.

“Stop staring,” Nadine said. “You’ve never felt alive like this?” She did not wait for an answer. She knelt and traced the grain of the parquet floor with one fingernail. A soft sigh escaped her lips. The texture held her focus.

Nicole glanced at the door, the urge to leave tempted her. She wanted to return to her own apartment, but the penthouse held her in place. Every glance from Archer, every subtle movement of the others, made leaving impossible. Her body throbbed with restless energy she could not control. She stayed, watching them change around her.

“I don’t know,” Nicole admitted. “I feel different.” A phantom wave of metallic pleasure, undeniably Nadine’s, washed over Nicole’s revulsion.

“You just don’t want to admit it,” Nadine said.

Archer twirled an empty vial. “Different doesn’t mean bad.” Jessamine backed away. Archer did not even look at her. His presence overwhelmed the atmosphere in the room.

Nicole shivered. The metallic taste pulsed again, a whispering hunger curling in her stomach.

Archer noticed her unease one evening. “It’s natural. You’ll learn to enjoy it.”

Nadine chuckled. “Don’t fight it, Nic. You’ll only hurt yourself.”

Melody murmured, “It’s part of this life now. The cravings. They’re natural.”

Jame coughed, checking his phone. The screen showed: “Delivery confirmed from Queens.”

The air had a new scent: musk, copper, and something savoury. Archer presented a tray. A silver dish held a single, dark red heart, slick and intact. He mentioned calmly, “Fresh from the Meatpacking District.” The heart pulsed faintly. Nadine’s pupils dilated. She reached for it. Melody watched, her jaw clenched. Archer looked only at Nicole.

“Nourishment,” Archer said, low. “The final step.”

Nadine tore a piece away. She swallowed with a shudder of pleasure. She opened her eyes, fixing Nicole with a gaze of furious, protective impatience. “Take it, Nic. Stop being weak. This is what we need.”

Nicole stared at the heart. Her enhanced senses screamed. The metallic warmth in her mouth intensified, twisting her gut with ravenous desire and revulsion. She backed up a full step, hitting the wall. She shook her head. “No,” she managed.

Nadine slammed her piece of the heart down. A dark splash flew onto the polished wood floor. Her face contorted, a mask of anger and frantic worry. “You’re throwing it away! You want to starve it? You’ll break, Nic. You’ll fall apart.”

In the far corner, Jessamine watched. Her terror was silent, deep, absolute. She clutched the cuff of her shirt, focused on Nicole’s refusal.

Archer’s calm fractured. He showed only disappointment. “It’s a natural process, Nicole. You resist what is perfect.” He retrieved the tray. “We’ll try again.”

Nicole sank against the wall, trembling, tasting bile instead of blood.


Jessamine’s refusal weighed on her. She observed quietly as the others moved through their days, alive in ways that were almost alien. Nicole felt her body change. She tried to resist, but the pull was constant.

Jessamine shook her head one night. “I can’t. I just can’t be part of this.”

Melody polished a glass. “It never asked you to be part of anything. It just showed what we stopped being.” She set the glass down with a clank.

“It’s still your choice. But every day you watch, you see the truth.” He held a tiny, glistening sliver of dark meat before Jessamine’s face. “It tastes like life,” he said. Jessamine froze, watching the fork.

Nadine and Melody exchanged a glance, a silent code. Without a word, they moved to intercept the scent of life Nicole had avoided, acting with precision, like a team of hunters synchronizing silently.

The horror was not survival. It was choice. That night, Manhattan continued on, unmoved, but before bed, Jessamine slid a heavy, old dresser across the floor until it wedged fully in front of her bedroom door.


Nicole’s cravings intensified. She heard footsteps in the distance, smelled blood in the air in the crowded Manhattan streets. Every nerve screamed, instincts twitching. Hunger whispered: not for survival but for something else. She passed a young woman holding her child’s hand. Her nose caught the pulse of life, a bright, copper scent. She stumbled. A harsh sound escaped her throat. She clapped a hand over her mouth, pressing hard. Every moment was torture. Morality frayed.

The gift demanded a debt. Its flawless vitality came with a gnawing need. The craving was for a primal, metallic warmth that pulsed in the hearts of others. The clarity the serum provided became a terrible witness. The user saw the compromise in perfect focus; there were no blurred lines or rationalized excuses. They knew the cost: the exchange of the human soul for this new, perfect machine.

A twitch in her jaw. A quiver in her fingers. Nicole realized the serum was not just in her veins. It was reorganizing her body, reshaping her senses, bending her toward the hunger she fought to resist.

The strength, the speed, the heightened senses were tools for one purpose alone. They had crossed a fixed, indelible barrier. Every heightened sensation now served a singular, dark instinct. They lived in perfection, but they forfeited peace. The choice was permanent.

Archer invited the group to a café. It was far from normal. The air was tense. Veins pulsed beneath arms and necks. Muscles tensed unconsciously. Jessamine sipped her tea, paralyzed, terrified. Jame pushed his plate of roasted chicken away. The meat looked grey and lifeless. Melody stared at the untouched food. Archer cut into his steak with calm, precise motion.

“It’s perfect,” Archer said softly. “Life like this, we enjoy it fully.”

Nicole swallowed. Metallic taste surged stronger, instincts twitching. She glanced at Jessamine, watching from the corn, repulsed.

She turned back to the window. Nicole glimpsed fleeting shadows moving through nearby streets, unnaturally fast. Each sighting made her lurch. She could sense hearts beating, calling to her, and part of her longed to answer.

Small hints of the serum spreading began. Archer offered a vial to acquaintances curious about health supplements. Nadine’s photography friends noticed subtle boosts in energy. Archer smiled knowingly. The horror extended beyond the penthouse: temptation and choice rippled quietly outward.

Nicole’s senses screamed. Hunger whispered constantly. She was no longer fully human. Perfect health arrived at a cost she couldn’t undo.


That night, Nicole stood at the penthouse window. Neon lights reflected off the glass.

The metallic taste in Nicole’s mouth vanished. Her perfect clarity blurred, replaced by a searing pain behind her eyes. Her skin, so recently flawless, tightened. She looked down. Her veins began to recede into a patchy, dull purple. Her body had turned on itself. She had starved the serum, and now it consumed her.

A desperate fear seized Jessamine. She smelled the failure. A sour, decaying scent cut through the apartment. She knew that soon, the group wouldn’t wait for ‘nourishment.’ They would turn to the only food available. She didn’t hesitate. She grabbed her keys and slipped past the heavy chest, scraping her shoulder.

The noise pulled the others from their rooms. Nadine found Nicole first. The twin stood still, staring at her perfect double failing, shrivelling back toward humanity. Rage replaced the worry in Nadine’s eyes. She didn’t yell. She gave a sharp, animalistic cry of disgust.

Archer, Jame, and Melody appeared. They glanced at Nicole, then registered the sound of Jessamine’s terrified flight down the stairwell. Jessamine was running proof of their new lives; she was also fresh, panicked food.

Archer’s smile returned, wider and sharper. “The choice is made,” he stated. “We stop waiting.”

The others moved without a word. They were a flash of speed and lethal focus, leaving Nicole behind. The heavy front door of the penthouse building burst with a final, echoing sound.

Nicole fell to the floor. Her body weak, clarity gone. She listened to the hum of the city.

Jessamine ran until she found a major hospital’s command centre, drawn to the sterile lights and the distant wail of sirens. She pushed through the doors yelling a frantic story about the serum, the hearts. A stern-faced security in chief’s uniform ushered her into a small office, promising safety.

He nodded calmly as he scanned the mounting casualty reports across the city. Jessamine sank onto a cold metal chair, collapsing with raw relief. The man lifted his head from the screen. His eyes were unusually clear and bright, with no sign of concern or wear. They held the same cold, absolute clarity that Archer’s possessed.

He smiled effortlessly. “We know, dear,” he said softly. “It’s all being handled.”

Jessamine balked, her relief curdling into dread. The horror was no longer confined to the penthouse. It had already won the command centre.

Hours later, the city’s indifferent hum began to crack. Police scanners reported a surge in aggressive assaults on the edges of the Meatpacking District. The 911 switchboards lit up with calls describing impossibly fast figures moving through the shadows of Central Park. Emergency broadcasts began circulating about two bodies discovered near the subway. Their organs were whole, but their hearts surgically removed.

And the horror was not contained. Reports came in from across Brooklyn, Queens, the Bronx, and Staten Island of similar sudden attacks. The pattern was identical: surgical removal of the heart. The Cardivores had spread their hunt across all five boroughs and beyond.

The choice was made. There was no turning back.