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The Day Brisa Died

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Summary

Brisa grew up listening to her grandmother’s stories, and her favorite was always the same: the time she had tricked Death itself by answering its questions correctly and earned a second chance at life. Brisa always thought they were just tales,until she was diagnosed with a terminal illness. After months of struggle, as the doctors try to revive her, the sound of the world fades, and a deep voice echoes inside her mind, asking impossible questions. To the Reaper, she is just another soul to harvest. In thousands of years, only one human had ever escaped by answering correctly. Brisa becomes the second. But this time, something changes. Intrigued, the Reaper decides to take human form to observe her... never foreseeing that inhabiting a mortal body would confront him with emotions he had long forgotten. Curiosity turns into fascination. Fascination, into an inevitable decision.

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: A Miracle

Brisa

The surgery went well.

The anesthesia is starting to fade. My head hurts, the room spins, the hospital smell makes me nauseous, and I don’t think there is a single part of my body that isn’t burning or pulsing with pain.

I focus on the steady beep of the machine, but it starts to slow. Is that normal?

An alarm sound. I hear hurried footsteps around my bed. Someone grabs my wrist to check my pulse. I try to open my eyes, but my eyelids weigh a ton.

What is happening?

“She’s going into cardiac arrest. Get the defibrillator!” a tense female voice says. I manage to open my eyes, though the voices begin to drift away, like I am hearing them from the bottom of a tunnel.

I see Dr. Winston, the one who did the operation, looking at me with a pale face. Her mouth moves, but her voice is an incomprehensible echo, as if she were shouting at me from very far away.

And then I see it. A black silhouette. Tall. Almost reaching the ceiling. It is not a body, not a human figure. It is smoke, a shadow made of dark trails that float and slide in the air.

“They will not make it in time.” The voice booms inside my head. It is deep, funereal, ghostly, and strangely calming.

“Who are you?” I think. I do not know if my lips move.

“It is not relevant,” it answers. “You must answer four questions.” If I could, I would laugh. This is exactly how my grandmother told it. Word for word.

The Reaper’s questions. I have heard them so many times I know them by heart.

When the voice starts to ask them, I answer without hesitation. As if I already knew the script of my fate.

…

I open my eyes.

The hospital room is silent and I am alone.

My body feels exhausted, but nothing hurts anymore.

And for the first time, I wonder if I am really still alive, or if it was all just a hallucination.

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