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Beneath the Black Water.

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Summary

Book 2 of the Unseen Truths series. The AI changed course, her protector Kian is gone, and Astra Vale woke beneath a black ocean water planet that hides its secrets in the depths...

Status
Complete
Chapters
23
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: Below the Surface.

Astra woke to motion.

Not the gentle suspension of cryogenic drift, not the soft return she’d been promised... but a slow, uneven sway that pulled at her stomach like the deck of a ship caught between waves.

Cold pressed into her back... what is that... Metal.

She attempted to move, but she felt as though she was trapped...

Pain flared at her wrists, sharp and immediate. Her ankles followed. Her chest resisted, her breath tightening against something unyielding.

Straps?

Her pulse quickened, and heat rushed through her limbs as panic rose quickly. She forced herself to breathe through it, starting shallowly and gradually slowing down. The cryo fog clung to her thoughts, thick and uncooperative, but instinct broke through cleanly.

Assess first... Panic later...

Her eyes adjusted.

Darkness... not total, but devouring. A kind that swallowed edges and depth, leaving only suggestion behind. Emergency lights glowed somewhere in the distant, faint and bluish, barely strong enough to reflect off the steel beneath her.

The platform shifted again.

Astra swallowed as the sound reached her... Is that water? She was moving in slow, deliberate rhythms. Not the rush of pipes or the churn of engines. Open water. Heavy and stormy. It sounds close.

Too close...

She turned her head as far as the restraints allowed.

The platform beneath her was small, barely wider than the steel trolley to which she was strapped. Industrial. Temporary. Its surface was coated in a matte black finish that absorbed light rather than reflecting it, rendering the structure almost invisible against the water surrounding it. From a distance, it would vanish completely... just another shadow riding the surface.

The platform rose and fell with the waves.

Her stomach twisted.

Above her, there were dark skies, almost black... and no stars. Just darkness pressing down, thick and airless.

Below...

The platform lurched.

Her breath caught as something moved beneath the water.

At first, she thought it was a shadow. Then it sharpened, resolving into shape: a vast, square outline directly below the platform, its edges faintly traced by submerged guide lights.

An elevator?

Not rising from solid ground, but from the depths themselves.

The water parted as it ascended, rolling back in heavy sheets. The structure was enormous compared to the fragile platform supporting her... steel walls slick with condensation, surfaces scarred and worn as if they’d been dragged through places that resisted being known.

The elevator locked into place with a deep, resonant clang that vibrated through her bones.

Astra’s fingers curled uselessly against the restraints.

“This isn’t right,” she whispered, her voice thin in the open air.

No answer came...

No AI voice... No system confirmation... No calm, precise reassurance cutting through the dark.

The absence was louder than any alarm.

The elevator doors began to open.

They didn’t slide smoothly. They peeled apart, metal protesting as though the structure itself resented exposure. A cold, sterile light spilled upward from below... white and unforgiving, stark against the black water and darker sky.

She squinted as the platform shifted again, aligning with the opening.

Mechanized arms extended silently, locking onto the platform’s edges. The sensation was unmistakable: capture. Transfer.

Astra’s pulse thundered.

The platform began to descend.

Water closed in around her peripheral vision as the surface receded above, the open air shrinking into a trembling, distant smear of darkness. The light from below grew harsher, reflecting off steel walls that bore no markings, no symbols... nothing to identify where she was or who claimed ownership of this place.

Her ears popped as pressure increased.

She strained against the restraints, muscles screaming in protest. “Hey...!” Her voice echoed uselessly, swallowed by the shaft.

Still, nothing answered...

The elevator swallowed the platform whole.

The doors sealed behind her with finality, cutting off the sound of water entirely.

The descent accelerated.

Lights passed in rhythmic intervals, each one briefly illuminating her surroundings: the steel bed trolley, bolted fast; the restraints at her wrists and ankles; and the faint rise and fall of her chest.

She searched instinctively for another pod.

For Kian... but there was nothing.

Her throat tightened.

He was supposed to be here.

The elevator slowed.

A jolt ran through the frame as it came to a stop.

The doors opened onto a corridor of glass and steel.

Beyond the transparent walls, water pressed in from all sides... dark, endless, alive with slow-moving currents that distorted the light into rippling patterns across the floor. Structures extended outward into the depths, layered and vast, connected by sealed walkways and illuminated platforms descending farther than her eyes could follow.

An underwater complex.

A prison... again.

The trolley began to move.

No hands touched it. No guards stepped into view. The floor itself guided her forward, smooth and inevitable, carrying her deeper into the structure.

She craned her head, searching for cameras, for personnel, for anything familiar.

There was nothing human in sight.

Just glass. Steel and endless water.

Cold settled into her bones, heavier than the cryogenic chill ever had.

The AI was gone.

Kian was gone.

And whatever this place was, it had taken her while she slept.

As the corridor opened into a larger chamber... bright, clinical, lined with sealed rooms behind reinforced glass... Astra understood one thing with terrifying clarity:

She hadn’t woken up early.

She hadn’t woken up late.

She had woken up exactly when they wanted her to.

And the water outside the glass pressed closer, patient and unyielding, as the prison beneath the black surface prepared to learn what she was.

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