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Queen of song and souls.

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Summary

Liora thinks this will be a normal year. Well she needs to think again.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Nayelise
Status
Complete
Chapters
40
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1:The Inciting Spark.


The first bell of Dawnspire Academy rang like a ripple of sunlight—soft, warm, and full of promise. Students poured across the marble courtyard, their footsteps glowing faintly as the runes beneath the stone responded to their elemental signatures. Fire students left ember trails. Water students shimmered with mist. Earth students made the ground hum. Air students stirred tiny whirlwinds.

And then there was Liora Vale.

Her footsteps didn’t glow, hum, or spark. They shined—a pale gold radiance that pulsed like a heartbeat. Light was rare enough, but Liora wasn’t just Light. She carried traces of every element, woven together in a way no one could explain. Some whispered she was a miracle. Others whispered she was a mistake.

Liora tried to ignore both.

She tightened the strap of her satchel and headed toward the Hall of Convergence, where all first-years trained together. Dawnspire prided itself on unity; no element was meant to dominate another. That was the Academy’s founding promise.

But lately… that promise felt thin.

Students had been arguing more. Fire clashed with Water. Earth accused Air of sabotage. Even the teachers seemed tense, their smiles stretched too tight.

Something was shifting.

Liora felt it in her bones.

As she stepped into the training hall, the air vibrated with energy. Today’s lesson was elemental resonance—pairing students of different elements to amplify their power. Liora was always the odd one out, so she usually trained alone.

But not today.

“Liora Vale,” Instructor Serin called, his voice echoing. “You’ll be paired with Kael Thorn.”

A murmur rippled through the hall.

Kael—top of the Fire class, temper like a wildfire, and absolutely not a fan of Liora’s strange abilities.

He approached with a smirk that didn’t reach his eyes. “Try not to blind me, Spark.”

She hated that nickname. Mostly because she didn’t know if it was an insult or a warning.

Serin gestured to the center ring. “Begin when ready.”

Kael ignited instantly, flames spiraling around his arms. Liora inhaled, letting her light gather in her palms. It flickered—nervous, uncertain—until she steadied it with a deep breath.

Their energies met in the center of the ring.

At first, it was beautiful.

Fire and light intertwined like dancing ribbons, swirling upward in a golden-red helix. Students gasped. Even Serin leaned forward.

Then something went wrong.

Kael’s flames surged, too fast, too hot. Liora’s light reacted instinctively, flaring brighter to contain it. The energies collided with a crack like thunder.

A shockwave blasted outward.

Students were thrown back. Runes shattered. The floor split open in a jagged line.

And in the center of the chaos, Liora stood trembling, her hands glowing with a blinding white she had never summoned before.

Kael stared at her, wide‑eyed. “What… what did you just do?”

Liora didn’t know.

But deep beneath the Academy, something ancient stirred—something that had been waiting for a spark exactly like hers.

The war that would tear Dawnspire apart had just begun.

And Liora Vale was at the heart of it.

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