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I Beautiful

"Beautifully written "

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An Adventure with Dada

"Hilarious!!! I love it!!! "

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Wonderful

"What a wonderful story. Some mistakes like worst fear doors had different names. But aside from that great! Loved the narrative. Crisp plot. "

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An advanture with dada

"I really loved the story. Specially the characters. They were amazing Keep up the good work "

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Moving...

"Publishing this would do the book justice .One of the best books i have read in a while."

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Loved it

"Loved your story, it's amazing, I wish you could make it into a video or something loved reading each chapter. Thank you writing such a nice story, it made my day "

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Fantastic

"This is the best book I've ever read. PERIODT. ."

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An adventure with dada

" It was a funny book and like it was a read more to find out so I couldn't stop reading lol.Also I recommend this book to all the people 16+ but I'm less than 16 but I still loved this book."

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Dang!

"You are a great arther. can you check mine out called Kitten Trouble."

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Loved it

"Amazing book loved it"

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An Adventure with Dada

"I totally loved the book! Every step of the way 😁 I felt like I was an adventure. I loved the fact that Ned was reincarnated into a bird! Great book! I have never laughed so much 😂❤️"

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ADORED IT

"I love your book a lot. The idea is really original. Your humor is just hilarious, but I am really upset that Ned died. WHY??? *cries* I loved him a lott~~~"

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Endlessly Entertaining

""An Adventure With Dada" is one of the best comedies I've read in such a long time. Filled with adventure, fun and "DANJOOR", this is definitely a golden book. The novel starts off at an average pace before picking up in laughs...okay, actually, it was the English misspellings that cracked me up most *guffaw*. My best character, which happens to be the main character and protagonist, is Gregory. I can totally relate to him—sarcasm intended. Gregory's personality is a mixture of bravery, love for his daughter and an all out ability to enjoy himself. I recommend this novel for a healthy dose of humor and guarantee that it will cure all your ails. *wink* (Psst! Author, please write another, I selfishly ask.)"

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Perfect!

"This story is astonishing. You somehow managed to write on a dark and serious topic in a perfectly amusing way. The story is full of sarcasm from the very beginning, it is as interesting as it gets. You have a witty, entertaining style of writing and I just love it. I could not take a smile of my face through the whole story, even though I was worried for the characters at certain points. You just make everything seem so easy and turn problems into astounding adventures. This gives a nice flow to the story. And I have to say that I simply ADORE the titles of your chapters. Titles are an important part of any story, they make the reader either interested or bored. Yours would get anyone curious. I love this story."

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My adventure with Dada

"Love the story, it's so full of life and very relatable to the parent of a young child. Youve got to get the character's names right here and there, but otherwise it's great"

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