Nothing More by Black-eyed Raven at Inkitt
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Nothing More

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Summary

He was the only one who listened to her. The only one who stayed. But when she told him he was “nothing more than a cat,” something inside him changed.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Nothing More

The grey cat was the only thing in the house that didn’t hurt her.


He never raised his voice.

Never turned away.

Never told her she was too much.


At night, when the walls felt closer and the air felt heavy, she would sit on the edge of her bed and press her forehead into his soft fur.


“You’re the only one who listens,” she would whisper.


And he did.


He watched her cry.

He watched her shrink into herself a little more each day.

He stayed.


But one night was different.


She had been crying longer than usual. Her hands trembled as they rested on his back.


“You’re just a cat,” she said, her voice hollow.

“You can’t fix anything. You can’t make it stop. You’re nothing more… nothing more.”


Nothing more.


The words echoed in the quiet room long after she fell asleep.


The cat remained awake.


Nothing more?

Was that all he was?


He jumped softly onto her bed and sat beside her pillow, staring at her sleeping face. Her breathing was uneven, fragile.


The room felt colder.


As he watched her, something strange began to happen.

A faint grey mist slipped from her parted lips — thin, trembling, almost alive. It rose slowly, like breath on a winter night, and drifted toward him.

He did not move.

The mist touched his eyes.

And he did not blink.

The air grew heavier. The girl’s fingers twitched. Her body seemed smaller against the sheets, as if the mattress had grown too large for her.

Her face tightened. Lines appeared where there should have been none. Her dark hair faded, strand by strand, until it matched the pale grey of dust.

She looked… emptied.

The mist was gone.

The cat jumped down from the bed and padded toward the old mirror in the corner of the room.

He stared.

The grey fur was no longer grey.

A sleek black cat stared back at him.

His eyes burned yellow in the darkness.

Behind him, on the bed, the small figure barely moved beneath the blankets.

For the first time, he felt something new.

Not helpless.

Not small.

Not “nothing more.”

And in the silence of the room, he understood—

He had listened long enough.

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