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The Sin Eater by James Hamblin

Summary

Detective Mara Voss sets out to solve the biggest crime of her career, with the help of a vigilante, built on torturing the sinners that have gotten away with murder. Will Mara catch the Sin Eater, or will she let these murders be justified?

Genre
Horror/Mystery
Author
James
Status
Complete
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 - “Ash Wednesday” “Ego peccavi.”

The words were scratched into the wooden floor, jagged and raw, like they had been carved with fingernails. Blood pooled beneath the body, thick and black in the dim candlelight. The scent of burnt flesh and incense clung to the air, mingling in a grotesque perfume of rot and reverence. He was kneeling. Or what was left of him. Former Judge Malcolm Kearns, sixty-three, revered in the city’s courts, feared in its alleys. His arms had been stretched outward, crucifixion-style, nailed through the tendons with rusted metal rods that hadn’t come from any modern toolkit. His mouth was pried open, lips torn, jaw cracked unnaturally wide. Something glinted at the base of his throat—silver coins, melted and poured into his mouth until he choked.

On the wall behind him, scrawled in black ash:“THE MEASURE YOU USE FOR OTHERS WILL BE USED FOR YOU.”Detective Mara Voss stood at the edge of the scene;her trench coat soaked at the hem from rain and alley grime. The crime scene was cordoned off, but the echo of the ritual stretched beyond yellow tape.Her partner, Owen, muttered beside her, “What the actual hell is this?”“Not hell,” Mara said quietly, studying the coins with narrow eyes. “Judgment.”They’d gotten the call at 3:17 AM. An anonymous tip. No fingerprints on the phone, no traceable signal. Just a voice: male, raspy, almost reverent.“He has eaten, and judgment is done.”The precinct techs thought it was a prank. Mara had felt the chill in her spine before she’d even stepped out the door.

Now, standing here, she was certain — this was no ordinary killing.Kearns had been a snake of a man. Mara had spent years trying to pin corruption charges on him, but he’d slipped through every time — armored by expensive lawyers, backroom deals, and a reputation polished by decades on the bench.But someone had judged him unworthy.And someone had carried out the sentence.“Whoever did this wanted to make a statement,” Owen said, squatting beside the body, careful not to touch anything. “Religious overtones. Latin. Cross-like posture. Ritualistic setup.”“Not just a statement,” Mara murmured. “A reckoning.”She moved toward the scrawled ash on the wall.

Something about it felt… wrong. Too precise. Like it hadn’t been drawn by hand, but branded into the stone with intention.Her phone buzzed. A message.Unknown Number:This is the first. He was not the last.She stared at the screen, then at the corpse. Earlier That Night The judge had woken in darkness.Hedidn’tremember falling asleep.Didn’tremember the drinkhe’dhad. Just… a stifling heat and a smell—burnt myrrh and sulfur.The room was cold stone, lit only by candles that flickered with no wind. Chains bound his wrists, pulled taut above his head. Naked. Vulnerable.He screamed. No one came.Then a shadow moved from the far end of the room. Not walked—drifted. A figure emerged in black robes, tattered like a funeral shroud dragged through mud and fire.

The face was obscured by a veil, but the eyes—no whites, no irises, just pits of shadow that stared into the marrow.The judge sobbed.“I don’t know who you are,” he gasped. “ButI’llpay you. Whatever you want. Just let me—”“Confess.”The voice was low. Ancient. It crawled through the air, curling around the judge’s ribs and heart like smoke made of knives.“I—I don’t—”“Confess your sin, Malcolm Kearns. You will not leave this place unclean.”“I Didn’t Do anything! I don’t—”Suddenly, the shadow was in front of him.A hand—pale, gnarled, covered in black veins—pressed against his chest. He screamed. His skin blistered beneath the touch, and memories surged from deep within:the bribes, the silenced victims, the girl he knew was telling the truth but buried with paperwork and red tape.He saw It all again. And then, he felt it leave him. “I eat your sin. ”The man arched back, mouth wide, eyes rolling. Something tore From him — not flesh, but guilt itself, black and heavy, sucked into the veiled creature’s chest like smoke being inhaled.

He collapsed, gasping, sobbing. Then the silver came. One by one, molten coins began to drip from the air above his mouth — each hissing with divine fire, each heavier than the last. Until there was no more screaming. Only silence. Back in the Alley “Voss.” Owen’s voice pulled her back. He held out something in a plastic evidence bag. A piece of paper. Child’s drawing. Crayon on old, yellowed scrap. A figure in black. Eyes hollow. Arms outstretched. Next to it, a stick figure in red. Xs for eyes. In the corner, a name scrawled in crayon: E. V. Mara’s blood ran cold.That wasn’t just any signature.It was her daughter’s initials.

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Great opening chapter! Looking forward to reading more!

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