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Forgotten Worlds Book of Kai
"I love the characters. I will keep reading as I have to know how the adventure goes."
Well-thought-out World
"Forgotten Worlds: Book of Kai is a book that reminded me of Hunger Games minus the arena but added with a magical concept of forces like Star Wars. So, judging by my comparison you can already tell that its going to be a nice read. The concept is very intriguing especially the rest of the colonies that had vanished. The fact that they were numbered is probably the reason why Hunger Games came into my mind, haha. The pacing of the story was nice. However, I feel like the ending was missing something. Probably, because it would be included in the sequel. But it would be nice if you could tap into that creature or illusion or whatever it was the happened inside the cave. You can also use that as an opportunity to show more of your character's personalities. Over all, great job! :) I hope you find this review helpful. :)"
This story made me feel. I loved Mariana.
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Fabulous beginning
"This is a very well written piece that will unfold into a fabulous book. I enjoyed your world and it is characters. Looking forward to where it is going... Keep up the good work :-)"
Great
"Even though this story is still not finished you can tell the author is putting in a lot of work as she writes with lots of detail when it comes to the government which her characters are in. I'm looking forward to seeing where this book is going."
A good start
"I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. being a first draft, there are some things that are just told in dialogue hat could be shown, or have the dialogue updated at least. I hope the author keeps updating it."
