The hidden door of Luna Virelli
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The hidden door of Luna Virelli

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Story Notes

This story is a mix of mystery, fantasy, and a little bit of chaos (mostly caused by the main character).

Episodes are posted regularly, and each one ends with a question—because I like keeping you curious.

If you enjoy:

sarcastic narrators,strange magical places,suspicious packages you probably shouldn’t open

…then you’re in the right place.

Also, fair warning: poor decisions will be made.

Summary

I woke up late. Ate leftovers. Ignored responsibilities like a responsible adult. Then someone knocked on my door. Twice. The problem? No one was there. What was there… was a small red box sitting on my “Go Away” mat. No name. No sender. Just three things inside: A key. A pen with my initials. And a message that made absolutely no sense— “The door is not where you think it is.” Now my wall is breathing, I may or may not have walked into a suspiciously magical garden, and there’s a girl staring at me like I’ve just made the worst mistake of my life. Hi. I’m Luna Virelli. And I have a feeling this is where everything goes wrong.

Genre
Fantasy,Mystery
Author
Zee
Status
2mo ago
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Her majesty and the knock

Episode 1 ♧ Her Majesty and the Knock

Today was a rather tardy day. I could say it drained me, but that would be dramatic… considering I accomplished absolutely nothing.

It all started with me—Her Majesty, by the way—waking up well after the crack of dawn. More like… lunchtime. I know, scandalous. But at least I’m not out there committing crimes. Low standards? Maybe. Still counts.

A splash of cold water revived me (barely), and my stomach immediately began protesting like it had been personally wronged. Naturally, I went searching for something delightful.

I found leftovers.

Cold. Lifeless. Offensive.

I ate them anyway.

Now, you’re probably already bored. I get it. Riveting story so far: girl wakes up late and eats sadness. But stay with me—because what happened next?

Suspicious.

There was a knock at the door.

I paused.

No one visits me. Ever. Not even by accident.

Still, I walked over—slowly, because if it was someone, they could wait—I opened the door.

Nothing.

No person. No footsteps. Just… air.

Now listen—I know what you’re thinking. “Hallucinations.” Rude. I heard it. Loud and clear.

I closed the door and returned to my royal duties of supreme loafing.

Then—

Another knock.

At this point, I was annoyed.

“Children,” I muttered. “Tiny, stinky agents of chaos.”

I marched back to the door, fully prepared to deliver a lecture no one asked for. But just before I reached it… something felt off.

A chill.

The kind that doesn’t ask permission. It just shows up.

Naturally, I ignored it and opened the door anyway.

And there he was.

Hunter.

My dog.

Tail wagging. Eyes hopeful. Completely unaware that he had just ruined a perfectly good mysterious moment.

Ha! Got you.

What were you expecting? A faceless creature? A ghost? Honestly, that would have been more interesting.

Episode 1 End ♧

But tell me… if it was just Hunter at the door… then who knocked the first time?

Let Zee know what you thought about this chapter!

Princess Fiona
Princess Fiona

Hi! I've been following your story and the atmosphere you've built is exactly the kind of energy I look for as a comic artist. It genuinely fits the style I work in and I kept imagining how certain scenes would look as manga or Webtoon panels.
If you're ever curious about what that could look like, you can check out my work and reach me on Discord (Fiona__princess), Instagram (fiona___princess), or X (Fiona__Princess). No pressure at all, just a genuine fan of your storytelling and wanted to share the thought.

7 months
Cryptic2025
Cryptic2025

I like this first chapter a lot. I like the character voice amazing first chapter you have got this 💪💪💜💪💪

3 months
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