What is your opinion?
Keepers of Equidor, book one
"This book is a twister and some, first the humans find a statue so to speak, then we plummet into this new past world of the Dragon and there rule over a period of thousands of decades....what next. Good stuff I'm into this book, keep it up."
Good thing these dragons aren't a drag!
"I have one thing to say before I start. I am disappointed. Yes. Very disappointed. Why? I am disappointed with myself. Why did I chose to read it NOW instead of earlier? I can’t believe I was missing something so awesome to read. Life is totally unfair. Especially when that awesome read was about… you guessed it—DRAGONS. Let’s admit it—who doesn’t get fascinated of dragons? Such beautiful, elegant creatures, roaring with might, soaring in the skies with the pulchritudinous figures they possess. These spectacular creatures had spellbound me since childhood. After all, dragons are amazing—read or watch of them—it doesn’t matter. Any kind of medium is very effective to tell their glory. And that’s what this book, entitled Keepers of Equalidor is all about. Dragons with a very sophisticated civilization, living their lives like how humans do in the medieval eras (kings, queens, princesses, etc.). Yet before that—or more accurately—thousands of years after that, there is Brooke Hannah, a paleontologist (coincidentally, also the author’s name), along with her friend Alexis and others, who got tangled in a discovery of something that can change the world of paleontology, leading to their further finding of a mysterious place. I’m not going to spoil what that place is. Starting with the story. I can see (read) something original and not cliched. The story itself has a lot of things in which you can praise upon. It has wonderful settings, because of the other world thingy (well, you’ll know it when you read it yourself), a nice plot, for it makes you wanting to keep on reading. For me, I keep suppressing my eagerness of reading this because of many reasons: school, limited cell phone battery, the time, homework, student council president duties, and many more. However, that doesn’t stop me from fully reading this grand novel which has many experiences for me to offer, yet not yet complete. The story was very interesting. Very unforgettable. Very excellent. The story had everything I expected, and I will have expected in the future. Then there goes the characters. The characters did not fail to play their roles as intended by the author. They were efficient in the development of the story (especially Aaden and Alexis, who were some of my absolute favorites). The main characters were also noteworthy. You can get fantastic imageries of the characters, all because the author gives a plethora of visual clues on how you can see them in your head, which makes it very good and well… umm… fantasizing? Brooke and Alexis is a very good duo, makes me want to ship them. Too bad Alexis is already engaged. I’m going to cry for a moment. I merely jest. Then comes Draven, whom I could ship with Brooke. Then Draven already has a girlfriend. I’m going to cry for a moment. I merely jest. I should remember that this is not a romance novel. Insert smileys here. Then there’s Marcus and Aaden who seems to be antagonistic at first, but then becomes friendly the next chapter. Such rapid round characters like them is unusual, but it doesn’t hurt the story at all. Then coming in were the DRAGONS. I’m not going to spoil it further, but I will say that I really loved them. Splendid and supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. Next up is the writing style. If talking about style, there’s no worry about it—people have variations. And the author’s style for this book is amazing, but the punctuations are kind of… what’s the difference of: “Let’s eat Grandpa,” vs. “Let’s eat, Grandpa,” Punctuation matters, but because I know that this book was written during the spoils of the WW Program, this might be rushed, so I understand it. (There’s also one more reason, if I recall correctly,) If you are curious about my enjoyment in my time reading this novel, then think no more. The answer is no-brainer. I really enjoyed its story, characters, and such. With the excellent combinations of genres, and with the plot implemented within. With the funny and serious scenes, and the magical experiences I have experienced, didn’t fail to enjoy me. Truly an ongoing masterpiece. Kudos to the author. Now I ask—when’s the next chapter?! I WANT MORE!! WHEN?! (Good thing I have read this novel before it became published in paperback. I’m so lucky.)"
Keepers Of Equalidor Book One
"Great dialogue to create characters and educate too. I would have recommended this for my grandchildren 10 - 13, but then some language popped out at me that makes me think this is for adults only. Perhaps, that is a bit prudish, as they hear these words, but probably not appropriate for children and teenagers."
This is a must read.
"When I clicked on this story, I was not disappointed. The author had me hooked from the very beginning, and that's what we all look for when searching for a good read. The plot and the details are just amazing. The story is not boring at all, nor is it cliche, and I would recommend this to anyone in a heartbeat. Amazing job!"
Amazing.
"You read Seraphina, you read Wings of Fire, now look out world, here is the next great dragon series, Keepers of Equalidor! I love how you added so many details to your story. the beginning alone had me hooked and me, being a massive dragon lover, I love the spin that this story took. a must read. like 99% of everybody, the spelling and grammar could use some work, but I think that this is off to a great start. I think you could maybe work on adding a little more emotion. if this were published, I would definitely buy it."
Gripping read
"This is a story that will grab you right from the start! Very detailed and exciting to read.. I can not wait to read the rest of it. I would change the lay out a bit and make paragraphs instead of separating them so much and work a bit on punctuation but there again this is a first draft so all that can come later!! Great Job!"
Cute Story
"This is a good story for YA and I assume readers in that age group would find it more engaging than I did. The dialogue was well written; however, the narrative would have been better if it were formatted properly. I suggest arranging it into paragraphs rather than separating each sentence. Best of luck on the remainder of the story!."
