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The Painted Saintess

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Summary

The Painted Saintess — Book One of the saga Where the Old Gods Drowned. There is a girl in the capital of Tamra whom no one looks at twice — and that is not an accident. When she saves a dying stranger with magic that would see her hanged, she sets in motion a story of pearls and corruption, drowned gods and painted scars, and a kingdom that used to be one body before someone taught it to hate itself. Begin with Chapter One. New chapters posted regularly.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Devini
Status
1mo ago
Chapters
25
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

The Pearl Divers of Heily 1

“We dive!” the woman roared, and the whole square roared back.

Prince Wanga reined in at the edge of the harbor mob and understood, at last, why they called this place Heily. The sun struck the coastal town like a hammer on an anvil, turning every surface to blinding light — and the crowd beneath it was a single seething animal, hundreds strong, shouting, jeering, pressing toward a platform where a magistrate cowered behind his guards.

At the center of it, standing on an overturned boat, was the woman.

Nessa. He’d read the reports on the long ride from the capital. Strongest diver in three generations. Leader of the Para tribe for fifteen years. The file had made her sound like a problem to be filed away. It had not mentioned that she was magnificent — nearly six feet tall, muscle moving under dark skin as she flung her arm toward the sea, her accent turning the Tamran words into something closer to a battle cry. But it was her eyes that caught him even at a distance: deep blue, startling against her complexion.

Around her stood the other divers, women unlike any he had seen in the refined courts of the capital. Years under the sun and sea had darkened their skin and forged their bodies into powerful tools — broad shoulders built to withstand the deep, strong backs for hauling nets heavy with oysters. Their simple cloth wraps left their arms and legs unencumbered for the work. They stood without apology.

Behind them, past the roofs, the water lay flat and impossibly blue — not the blue of sky reflected, but a deeper thing, lit from beneath, as though something down there had never quite gone dark.

“We risk everything! We bring pearls from the deep!” Nessa’s voice cut clean through the chaos. “The sea we live in — the sea we love — it is bleeding! The Velanikans rip its heart out with their iron nets, and our own king does nothing but claim his share of the plunder! He takes his part while they destroy our home, and we bury our sisters!”

The crowd’s answer split down the middle — half a roar of support, half a wall of jeers.

“Look at them,” a merchant muttered near Wanga’s stirrup, to no one in particular. “Half-naked savages. No shame.”

“I’m certainly looking,” his companion said, with a leer.

Wanga heard them and said nothing. His focus was entirely on the woman on the boat.

This was not what he’d been sent for. He’d been sent to end this — his father’s orders had been three words long. Restore order. Remind them of their place. The pearl divers’ grievances were an old, simmering story, a complaint that lived on a minister’s desk. A civilized problem, meant for a civilized afternoon of paved-road debates, with a chilled glass at his favorite tavern by evening.

Instead he was here, sweating through his collar, watching a fanatic make a liar of every report he’d been handed.

Because she wasn’t performing. He’d sat through enough rehearsed grievances to know the difference. This was raw, personal, boiling over with a truth someone had kept off his desk. The treaty, he thought. Father signed the treaty with the Velanikan king to end exactly this. The navy was supposed to be patrolling these waters. So why is she still burying her sisters?

“Your Highness.” General Dheega’s voice was low at his elbow. “The magistrate is waiting. He insists you disperse them. By force, if necessary.”

“Force.” Wanga didn’t look away from the crowd, where a young Para woman was shielding a small child from the crush of bodies. “They’re pearl divers, Dheega. Not soldiers.”

“They’re disrupting commerce. The Eastern Trading Company has filed formal complaints.”

Wanga turned to his general. “The Eastern Trading Company files complaints? With whom? They’re merchants.”

“With the magistrate. Who forwards them to the capital.” Dheega said it the way a man recites a procedure he has never once thought to question.

Something cold began to sharpen behind Wanga’s eyes. “They’re the ones buying the pearls. Aren’t they?”

“Through the government officers. Yes. Standard procedure.”

“And what are they paying?”

Dheega shifted in his saddle. “I don’t know the exact rates, Your Highness.”

“Find out.”

Before Dheega could answer, Nessa’s voice sliced across the square again.

“You pay twenty copper pieces for a pearl!” She was staring straight at the magistrate’s platform now. “I have seen the manifests on the Eastern Trading Company’s ships! Those same pearls sell for one gold piece in the foreign markets!”

A stunned silence dropped over the crowd, then broke into a wave of shocked murmurs.

Wanga’s mind did the arithmetic before he could stop it. A fifty-fold markup. The number was obscene. Impossible. This wasn’t commerce. This was predation.

“She lies, Your Highness!” the magistrate shrieked, his voice pitched too high. “The foreign markets are different — transportation, merchant fees, tariffs—”

“A fifty-fold increase,” Wanga said. “For transportation costs."

He hadn’t meant to say it aloud. But his voice carried — cold and clear across the suddenly quiet square — and every face turned toward him.

The magistrate’s mouth opened and closed, his face flooding a deep, flustered red. “Your Highness, these women — they don’t understand high commerce—”

“We understand theft!” Nessa’s fierce blue eyes found Wanga’s across the distance and held them, challenging the very core of his mission. “Are you here to listen, Prince? Or are you just here to silence us?”

The square went still.

Everyone watched. Waiting to see what the prince would do.

Wanga could feel the weight of expectations pressing down from all sides. The magistrate wanted them dispersed. The capital wanted order. His father wanted the problem solved. The merchants wanted their commerce flowing. Even Dheega, loyal as he was, wanted a decision — any decision — to break the terrible tension.

But looking at Nessa’s blue eyes, fierce and proud and blazing with challenge, he found himself asking a different question: What if they’re right?

The easy path stretched before him, familiar and comfortable. He could give the order. Clear the square. Be back in Kalyra by week’s end, this unpleasant business filed away in some minister’s report. The cool shade of the royal study. A chilled glass. The satisfied feeling of a problem neatly solved.

Then his gaze drifted past Nessa, across the crowd — and snagged on a woman near the front. Older, perhaps fifty, her body still powerful but marked with the white scars of old wounds. Her dark hands rested on the shoulders of a girl of twelve or thirteen who stood before her. The girl’s eyes were fixed on Wanga with an intensity almost painful to meet.

Those eyes held everything. Please. Please see us. Please don’t turn away like all the others.

The woman’s hands tightened on the girl’s shoulders. Not pulling her back. Anchoring her. Protecting her from hope.

And suddenly Wanga remembered something the Royal Master had said, years ago, during a lesson he’d barely listened to.

“The people create gods when they are helpless and neglected,” the old scholar had said. “When no earthly power will hear them, they turn to the divine. Not because they are primitive. They turn to gods because they have been abandoned by those who should protect them. A child does not pray to invisible forces when their parent is present and attentive. They only cry out to the darkness when no one else will answer.”

Wanga had nodded politely and forgotten the words by dinner.

Now, standing in this sun-scorched square, they struck him like a hammer blow.

He looked at the crowd again — truly looked — and saw the small details he’d missed. The carved pendants around so many necks, each depicting a woman with a fish’s tail. The whispered prayers on moving lips. The hands touching talismans of carved wood and polished shell.

The Para tribe worshipped a mermaid goddess. He’d read it in the reports — a footnote marked as evidence of their primitive nature. But now he understood. They worshipped a protector of the deep because she would hear them when no earthly power would. Because kings and princes and magistrates had turned away.

They had created a god because they’d been abandoned.

Or — the thought arrived sideways, unwelcome, and he pushed it away almost before it finished — they had not created her at all, and the capital had simply never gone down far enough to look.

And here he was. Crown Prince of Tamra. Earthly power incarnate. The very person who should have heard them. If he gave the order now and rode back to his comfortable life, he would become the reason they clutched those pendants. He would be the abandonment that made gods necessary.

The realization settled over him like a cloak — heavy, uncomfortable, inescapable, and somehow right.

That girl’s eyes hadn’t held anger. They’d held a question: Will you be different?

Wanga straightened in his saddle. The reins were slick with sweat in his palms. He thought of his father, who would be disappointed. Of the ministers, who would be scandalized. Of the comfortable life he was about to complicate beyond measure.

Then he looked at Nessa again, and he could not — would not — be the reason these people stayed unseen.

“I’m here to listen,” he said.

His voice carried across the silent square. The words felt like a bridge burning behind him, and somehow that made them easier to say.

“Lady Nessa. I would speak with you. Privately. Will you come?”

The square erupted — shocked gasps, angry shouts, surprised murmurs swirling into chaos. The magistrate’s face, when Wanga glanced at it, was a pale mask of pure, unadulterated panic.

But Wanga kept his eyes on Nessa, and waited.

She studied him for a long moment, those startling blue eyes searching his face for something. Whatever she found there, it was enough.

She nodded once — a sharp, decisive movement.

“Agreed.”

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I'd love to read the next chapter

3 months
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You've built a prince worth watching not because he's powerful, but because he listens. Powerful people who actually listen are always more interesting :)

2 months
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The clash between royal duty and raw, fierce justice is written brilliantly. I cannot wait to see what decision Wanga makes next!

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