Hallway Nine by MakaylaB at Inkitt
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Hallway Nine

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Summary

Lena thought surviving the nightmares meant escaping them. She was wrong. Weeks after believing she finally woke up, reality begins breaking again. Strangers recognize Lena from places she’s never been. People across the city report the same disturbing dreams. Memories disappear. Time goes missing. And every path somehow leads back to Hallway Nine. As Lena searches for answers, Elias returns—but something about him has changed. He has missing memories, strange behavior, and secrets he refuses to explain. Soon Lena discovers a horrifying truth: she was never the only one trapped. Others have seen Hallway Nine. Others have entered. Some never came back. As the hallway changes and its rules become more twisted, doors begin appearing where doors should not exist, shadows move without owners, and the smiling man gets closer than ever before. Because Hallway Nine isn’t a place. It’s waiting. And someone has been trapped inside far longer than Lena realizes.

Genre
Horror
Author
MakaylaB
Status
Complete
Chapters
15
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1-Back Again

Three weeks had passed since Lena Hart stood in front of her bathroom mirror and watched her reflection smile when she hadn’t.

Three weeks since the nightmare supposedly ended.

Three weeks since doctors told her she had survived a coma.

Three weeks since she convinced herself Hallway Nine was finally behind her.

No whispers.

No endless corridors.

No red doors waiting in the darkness.

No Smiling Man watching from the corner of her vision.

For the first time in months, sleep came without fear.

At least, that’s what she kept telling herself.

The truth was she still checked every mirror she passed.

Still woke in the middle of the night to make sure every clock displayed the correct time.

Still avoided thinking about the things she had seen.

Because deep down, beneath the fragile routine she was trying so desperately to rebuild, Lena carried a fear she couldn’t shake.

What if the hospital wasn’t real?

What if she never escaped?

What if Hallway Nine was simply waiting?

Gray morning light filtered through the blinds of her apartment, painting pale stripes across the walls.

Lena opened her eyes.

And for one brief moment, before reality settled around her, she listened.

Waiting.

Listening for dripping water.

Listening for whispers.

Listening for something breathing in the darkness.

Nothing answered.

Only silence.

Only morning.

Only the life she was trying to believe belonged to her again.

She lay still, counting her breaths the way her body had learned to do—one, two, three, check the shadows in the corners, check the open closet door, check the mirror mounted on the far wall.

No Smiling Man.

No flickering lights.

No black water seeping beneath the door.

Just her apartment.

Just morning.

She exhaled and swung her legs over the side of the bed.

Twenty-four years old. Dark-brown skin. Almond-shaped brown eyes that still carried shadows beneath them—the residue of weeks spent afraid to close them. Her thick curly black hair was a mess she didn't have the energy to fix. The small scar beneath her chin, left over from a childhood fall she couldn't fully remember, caught the light as she passed the window.

She caught her own reflection in the dresser mirror and held her gaze.

You're fine. You're awake. You're here.

She looked away. Looked back.

The reflection matched. No delay. No smile she didn't authorize.

Good.

---

The apartment had become a museum of her fear over the past months. She'd rearranged furniture to eliminate blind corners. She'd covered the bathroom mirror for a week before forcing herself to uncover it. She kept a clock on every wall now—kitchen, living room, bedroom, bathroom—because checking one had stopped being enough.

But for three weeks, every clock had moved normally.

For three weeks, sleep had been silent.

She was starting to believe it was over.

---

She made coffee. Black. Too hot. She burned her tongue and didn't care.

The kitchen was small, cluttered with photography textbooks and unsubmitted assignment drafts. Her graduate program had granted her extensions after her "health crisis"—the polite fiction she'd offered instead of I was trapped in a nightmare hallway that might exist between dream and reality. She'd told no one the truth. Not her advisor. Not the few friends she hadn't ghosted.

What would I even say?

She walked to campus that morning. The November air was cold enough to sting. Other students passed her on the sidewalk—talking, laughing, carrying coffee cups, checking phones. Normal people living normal lives.

Lena watched them and wondered, as she always did now, if any of them were real.

She hated that reflex.

At the library, she found a seat by the window. She pulled out her laptop, opened a half-finished paper on urban decay in contemporary photography, and stared at the cursor blinking on the screen.

Urban decay.

She closed the document and opened a different one instead. Untitled. Private. Forty-three pages of notes on Hallway Nine.

She hadn't looked at it in two weeks.

She looked at it now.

Shared dreams. Missing memories. Reality distortion. Doppelgängers.

Elias.

His name sat on the page like an accusation. She hadn't heard from him in three weeks. The last time she'd seen him, he'd been standing in her doorway at 3:17 A.M., his round glasses askew, his dark curls matted with sweat, asking her if she remembered his name.

"Of course I remember your name," she'd said.

"Say it."

"Elias."

He'd stared at her for a long moment. Then he'd smiled—a wrong smile, too wide, not his—and walked away. She hadn't followed.

She still didn't know if that had been him.

She closed the document.

---

At 2:47 P.M., she was back in her apartment.

She'd spent the afternoon avoiding conversations about dreams. A classmate had asked if she'd been sleeping better. "Yes," she'd lied. "Much better." Another had mentioned a nightmare about drowning. Lena had excused herself to the bathroom.

She was rinsing her coffee mug when she heard it.

Dripping water.

She froze.

The sound came from the kitchen sink—except the faucet was off. She turned slowly, watching the empty sink. A single drop fell from the spout. Then another. Then nothing.

She stared at the faucet for a full minute.

Just a drip. Old building. Bad pipes.

She dried her hands and walked to the living room.

Her phone buzzed on the coffee table.

She picked it up. Unknown number.

The message was brief.

Did you miss us?

Lena's blood went cold.

She had changed her number after Book 1. Deleted old contacts. Requested a new SIM card. Told no one except her advisor and the apartment manager.

There is no way anyone has this number.

She didn't respond.

Another buzz.

Look at the clock.

She looked at the clock on the wall. 2:53 P.M.

She looked at the clock on her phone.

2:53.

She looked at the microwave display across the kitchen.

2:53.

She walked to the bedroom doorway. The digital alarm clock read 2:53.

She checked her watch—the analog one Elias had given her, before.

2:53.

Something shifted in the air. A pressure change. Like the moment before a storm.

She looked back at her phone.

New message.

Check again.

She looked at the wall clock.

The second hand was moving backward.

She spun to the microwave. 2:52. 2:51. 2:50.

The phone buzzed again and again and again in rapid succession—messages stacking on top of each other, too fast to read—until every screen in the apartment went dark for a single heartbeat.

Then they came back on.

Every clock read the same time.

3:17.

Lena stopped breathing.

The apartment was silent. Too silent. No traffic from the street. No footsteps in the hallway. No hum from the refrigerator.

She walked to the window.

The street below was frozen.

People stood mid-stride. A car idled at the intersection, its driver's face blank and unmoving. A bird hung in the air between buildings, wings spread, not falling.

She pressed her palm against the cold glass.

This isn't happening.

A whisper came from directly behind her left ear.

"Welcome back."

The voice was dry. Familiar. It wasn't the Smiling Man's voice—it was softer, almost gentle, and that made it worse.

She turned.

No one was there.

The street outside remained frozen.

She stood in the middle of her living room, surrounded by clocks all reading 3:17, and felt the walls between dream and reality grow thin.

---

The freeze lasted ninety seconds.

Then traffic moved. People walked. The bird flew away.

The clocks returned to normal time—3:18, 3:19—as if nothing had happened.

Lena sat on her couch for an hour, not moving, not speaking, not texting anyone because there was no one left to text. She had tried calling Elias twice. The number was disconnected.

By 5:00 P.M., she had convinced herself she'd imagined it.

Sleep deprivation. Residual paranoia. A hallucination.

You've been under so much stress.

You need rest.

She almost believed it.

---

She stood in front of the bathroom mirror at 7:47 P.M., washing her face, not looking at her reflection. She kept her eyes on her hands, on the faucet, on anything but the glass.

When she finally looked up, she checked for a delay.

There wasn't one.

She checked for a different reflection.

There wasn't one.

She exhaled.

You're fine.

She dried her face and walked back into the living room. She passed the full-length mirror mounted on the far wall—the one she'd positioned to face the front door, because she needed to see anyone who entered before they reached her.

She didn't stop.

She didn't turn.

But in her peripheral vision, she saw something wrong.

She stopped breathing.

Slowly—against every instinct—she turned her head toward the mirror.

The Smiling Man stood behind her.

He was not in the room. She could feel the empty air at her back. No weight. No breath. No presence.

But in the reflection, he was there.

Tall. Thin. Unnatural proportions. Empty sockets where his eyes should have been.

Smiling.

He had always been smiling.

She stared at the mirror. He stared back from somewhere that was not her apartment—somewhere between dream and reality, somewhere she had escaped for three weeks and was now standing at the edge of again.

She did not turn around.

She did not scream.

She watched his reflection smile wider.

Then the bathroom light flickered behind her—three quick pulses—and when she looked back at the mirror, he was gone.

But her reflection was still standing there.

Waiting.

Watching her.

Lena's reflection smiled.

Lena did not.

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