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The new formed dimension part 2

Summary

After escaping the mysterious dimension, the protagonist believes the nightmare is finally over. But when a glowing red mark appears on his hand with a countdown timer, he realizes the danger has only just begun. As the timer approaches zero, strange voices warn him of an incoming disaster. Moments later, the terrifying red portal reopens, unleashing monstrous creatures that seek the powerful staff he once stole and discarded into the endless void. With his world collapsing around him, he races to find a solution. Cities crumble, buildings turn to ash, and panic spreads as the creatures hunt for what belongs to them. Desperate to survive, he devises a risky plan using a fake staff and a deadly trap. For a moment, it seems he has won. But not every monster followed the bait. As the last creature closes in, he discovers that some mistakes cannot be undone—and some dimensions never stop taking what they have lost. Genre: Sci-Fi • Dark Fantasy • Horror • Psychological Adventure

Genre
Scifi
Author
HasanAhmed
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

part 2

**The New Formed Dimension**

I returned to my couch, watching TV, when I noticed a strange red light on my hand. It had a timer of about 1 hour and 30 minutes. I felt anxious about what would happen, so I slept again to try to open the dimension, but nothing happened. I tried about six times, but still nothing happened.

After that, when I looked again at my hand, there were only two minutes left. I heard a lot of voices telling me, “The disaster is coming to you.” So I went to my old base, it had everything I needed.

Suddenly, beneath me, there were a lot of cracks, so I ran up. Then I realized that everyone was gathering around the cracked place. I told everyone about my hand. They became anxious and ran away, but some of them stayed because they were curious.

We heard “3, 2, 1” … and the same red portal from the dimension opened. Huge, scary red monsters came out, shouting and asking for their staff. They were terrifying.

I started running to my car, but they smashed and destroyed it. I felt anxious, afraid, and shocked. But I forced myself to be brave and went into the portal without anyone seeing me to get the staff.

Then I remembered — I had thrown it into the void.

When I returned, everything was destroyed and turned to ashes. The monsters became even angrier, so I ran away and made a fake stuff out of wood. I threw it into the portal, and they followed it. Then I threw dynamite and ran away.

But one monster was left.

I tried to run…

…but he ate me.

**The End**

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