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Summary

TOTAL DELETION The invitation was matte black. The prize was a million dollars. The catch? You have to survive the truth. Lia Vienne is a "ghost" creator—faceless, aesthetic, and struggling to pay the bills. When she’s invited to The Oasis, a private island for the world's top influencers, she thinks her luck has finally changed. But the plane never reaches paradise. Instead, Lia and nine other creators crash into The Archive—a rusted, industrial wasteland where the sky is made of code and the shadows are filled with drones. Trapped with the cynical "Prince of Content," Soren Van Doren, Lia discovers a terrifying secret: they weren't brought here to compete. They were brought here to be replaced. As a countdown to "Account Termination" begins, Lia must use her only weapon—a fake designer bag—to glitch a system that knows her every secret. In a world where your identity is for sale, how do you stay real? [ TECHNO-THRILLER | MYSTERY | SLOW-BURN ]

Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Descent

The invitation didn’t come through an email or a DM. It arrived in a box that felt too heavy to be just paper.

I sat on my bed, the springs creaking under me, and stared at it. It was matte black, tied with a silk ribbon that looked like liquid obsidian. In the corner of the room, my ring light—the only expensive thing I owned—caught the light, reflecting a perfect white circle in the window.

To my 100,000 followers, I was The Velvet Library. I was a girl who lived in oversized sweaters, drinking tea in sun-drenched nooks, surrounded by first-edition books. I was an “aesthetic.” I was peace.

In reality, I was Lia Vienne, a girl who worked two shifts at a cafe just to afford the books I photographed for my feed.

I pulled the ribbon.

Inside wasn’t a card. It was a sleek, black smartphone with no buttons and a screen that took up the entire front. It hummed against my palm, a single notification glowing in the center of the glass:

You’re invited to the end of the world.

I tapped it. A video flickered to life. It wasn’t the usual bright, flashy travel ad. It was slow-motion shots of a private island—cliffs of volcanic rock, sand the color of crushed pearls, and a house made entirely of glass and steel perched over the ocean.

“Ten creators,” a voice whispered. It was deep, cool, and genderless. “Thirty days. No cameras but ours. One million dollars to the person who stays the longest.”

My breath hitched. A million dollars. That wasn’t just “move out of my parent’s house” money. That was “change my entire life” money.

“The Oasis is waiting, Lia. Don’t be late.”

The screen went black, and then my real phone buzzed on the nightstand. It was a text from a number I didn’t recognize, but I knew who it was. There was only one person who could have put my name on that list.

Ivy St. Claire: Did you get it? Don’t get weird on me, Lia. I need a ‘real’ person there to make my content look authentic. Just play the quiet book girl. I’ll handle the rest.

I looked at the black phone. I looked at the pile of unpaid bills on my desk.

I didn’t care about being Ivy’s “authentic” best friend. I didn’t care about the glass house or the white sand. I cared about the million dollars. But as I stared at the phone, a second message popped up. Not from Ivy. From a sender named ARCHIVE.

ARCHIVE: The last person who went to that island didn’t come back. Check the glass, Lia. Everything is a reflection.


The private hangar at the airport smelled of jet fuel and money.

I stood by the entrance, clutching the handle of my tote bag so hard my knuckles were white. It was a “designer” bag I’d bought from a shady website for eighty dollars. To anyone passing by, the gold ‘L’ logo looked real enough, but I could feel the cheap plastic lining inside, crinkling every time I moved. It was a lie I was carrying on my shoulder.

“Lia! Over here!”

Ivy St. Claire didn’t walk; she floated. She was dressed in a cream-colored silk tracksuit that probably cost more than my entire year of college tuition. Behind her, a cameraman followed her every move, holding a gimbal that kept the shot perfectly steady.

She didn’t hug me. She posed next to me, ensuring her “good side” was toward her lens. “Oh my god, you look so… sweet,” she whispered, her eyes flicking to my bag for a microsecond. A smirk touched her lips. She knew it was fake. “It’s very relatable. The fans are going to eat it up.”

“Glad I could help,” I muttered, my face burning.

I looked around at the others. There were eight of them, all glowing with that strange, artificial radiance that comes from expensive skincare and 24/7 attention.

Then I saw him.

He was sitting on a stack of Pelican equipment cases, away from the groups of people filming TikTok dances. He was wearing a simple black hoodie and joggers, staring at a Leica camera in his hands. He looked like he hadn’t slept in two days, but he was still the most striking person in the room.

“That’s Soren,” Ivy whispered, following my gaze. “Don’t bother. He’s the ‘Prince of Content.’ Ten million followers, and he hasn’t done a brand deal in a year. He’s only here because he’s friends with the CEO ofLuxe-Z. He thinks he’s better than us.”

Soren looked up then. His eyes weren’t bright like the others; they were dark and tired, like a storm that had finally run out of rain. He looked at Ivy, then his gaze drifted to me. He didn’t look at my fake bag. He looked straight into my eyes, and for a second, I felt like he could see the bills I couldn’t pay and the secret journal hidden in my luggage.

He didn’t smile. He just went back to his camera.

“Alright everyone! On the plane!” a voice boomed.

The jet was a tube of leather and chrome. As we took off, the influencers began to perform. They recorded “Day 1” intros, they toasted with crystal glasses of sparkling water, and they laughed at jokes that weren’t funny.

I sat in the back, staring out the window at the ocean below. I pulled the black phone out of my pocket. The message from ARCHIVE was still there: Check the glass, Lia. Everything is a reflection.

I looked at the window next to me. In the reflection of the glass, I didn’t see the luxury cabin. I saw the back of Soren’s head two rows in front of me. He wasn’t filming. He was writing something in a small, battered notebook.

Suddenly, the plane jolted. The “Fasten Seatbelt” sign didn’t just light up; it flashed red.

The cheerful music over the speakers died, replaced by a low, rhythmic thumping. One by one, the influencers stopped filming. The cabin lights flickered and turned a deep, unsettling crimson.

A message appeared on every single seat-back screen at once. It wasn’t a movie. It was a countdown.

00:59… 00:58…

And underneath the timer, a single sentence: “The first one to unfollow lives.”


The crimson light turned everyone’s skin a sickly, bruised purple. Ivy was screaming, her cameraman was frantically trying to save his equipment, and the “Fasten Seatbelt” sign was buzzing like an angry hornet.

I didn’t look at Ivy. I unbuckled my belt and crawled toward the front of the plane, my knees bruising against the plush carpet.

“Soren!” I shouted over the roar of the engines.

He wasn’t panicking. He was standing in the aisle, his Leica camera hanging forgotten around his neck, staring at the cockpit door. When I grabbed his arm, his skin was ice cold.

“Soren, what is this? What’s the countdown?”

He turned to me, his eyes wide and hollow. “It’s not a game, Lia. Look at the screens.”

I looked. The countdown had hit 00:15. Underneath it, the words had changed: “TOTAL DELETION INITIATED.”

“The pilot,” Soren whispered, pointing at the cockpit. “I looked through the glass two minutes ago. There’s no one in there. It’s an autopilot loop.”

My heart fell into my stomach. I lunged across the seat to the window, pressing my face against the cold glass. We were dropping fast, cutting through a thick layer of grey clouds. I expected to see the turquoise water and white sand of the Pacific.

Instead, I saw a wasteland.

We were flying over a massive, rusted graveyard of ships and containers, stretching for miles in every direction. There was no island. There was only a crumbling, industrial city rising out of a black sea, lit by flickering orange fires. It looked like a world that had died a hundred years ago.

“We aren’t in the Pacific,” I gasped, turning back to Soren. “Where are we?”

“Nowhere,” he said, his voice barely audible over the screaming wind. “We’re in the Archive.”

00:03... 00:02... 00:01...

The floor of the plane didn’t just shake; it vanished. A massive explosion ripped through the tail of the jet, and the cabin depressurized with a violent pop.

I felt myself being pulled toward the jagged hole in the fuselage. I reached out, my fingers brushing against the strap of my fake designer bag, but it was ripped away, spiraling into the dark void outside.

The last thing I saw before the world went black was Soren reaching for my hand, his face illuminated by the final glow of the seat-back screen.

“ACCOUNT TERMINATED.”

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