What is your opinion?
My Imaginary Friends Don't Like You
"I absolutly loved this one as well. I love your imagination. This is really really good. You should totally turn this into a book. "
Creepy...
"...Is this a one shot? I have a feeling it is. If no, then, a wonderful start for a psychological horror. I love these kinds of stories, they can make you so paranoid sometimes. I would love to read more, but hey! If you're not going to post another chapter then it's fine with me. :)"
Creepy, but in a good way
"This story entertained me. I love concepts that deal with "imaginary friends" who turn out to be anything but imaginary. You put a very creative twist on that concept. Well done. The creatures themselves sound absolutely terrifying. They can take lives without anyone finding out about them. The burden is on the main character. That's why I liked that you mention the possibility of suicide--it adds uncertainty, and a bit of mystery to the main character. It makes me want to know more about him. I'd like to know more about the creatures as well. It seemed you summed it up very generally by saying they came from a portal in another dimension. In fact, my only critique is that you give them a more interesting backstory. Or, none at all. You could have just said that they grew up with the main character as his imaginary friends, that's it. (Or maybe even grew from a part of him. Of course, that's just my suggestion. This is your story, so you write what you envision. :) The story flowed VERY nicely. I didn't even a spot one grammatical error! It shows that you put effort into this. I commend you on that. ^^ Overall, it was a satisfying, creepy little short. I enjoyed it."
Good to read.
"I enjoyed this it flows well and I love the last line. You leave enough to the imagination which IMO is the way to go. Shape shifters are a well used ploy but this was a different approach. Well done."
SCARY
"OMG, you really got me shivering... especially that i am reading it at night... and i really got scared........... why did my teddy's eyes became so shiny. OMG..... hey btw... would you complete it? cuz i really like .. i put it in my reading list:)....keep up the good work peace out:)"
Impressive!
"I like your take on Imaginary friends. It was very dark and quite supernatural. I even liked when you went through a timeline of their transformation. I also liked how you didn't spell out exactly what they looked like because we were supposed to use our own imaginations to determine such things. I do wish that you would have elaborated on what exactly happened to that poor man as he was killed and whether people saw it or not. It isn't a big deal or anything, but I was just curious."
