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Great continuation!

"That was a pretty good continuation of the previous 'Roy' story. You must have been able to make this because the previous author permitted you too. So lots of thanks to him. And obviously to you for writing it! The plot actually appealed to me because I believe in the ''two sides to every coin' principle. Also, do you like dinosaurs? I amwriting a dinosaur scifi at inkitt, Semisaurs: The Chosen Generation."

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Don't

"Inexcusably sick and twisted. The sensitive material was handled without grace or respect. Hurried, juvenile story-telling. Not to mention you (the author) wrote and posted this story before obtaining permission from the author of the original work to use the characters and the premise, that crosses the line into plagiarism."

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