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# Chapter One: Albert The rain hadn't stopped for three days. It fell in steady gray sheets over the city, washing the streets clean of everything except the truth that Albert Crane couldn't seem to escape. He stood in the doorway of apartment 4B, hands shoved deep in the pockets of his worn trench coat, watching the forensic team work. The body had been discovered at 6:47 a.m. by a neighbor who'd noticed the door ajar. By the time Albert arrived, the hallway already smelled of coffee, wet carpet, and something metallic that no amount of air freshener would ever mask. "Albert." Detective Rosa Mendez greeted him with a nod, her voice low and careful. "Glad you could make it." "You said it was him," Albert replied, not looking at her. "The same signature." Rosa didn't answer right away. She waited until they were alone near the kitchen, out of earshot of the younger officers. "It's him. Same knife, same method, same sick little ritual with the photographs arranged in a circle o...

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Chapter 1

# Chapter One: Albert The rain hadn't stopped for three days. It fell in steady gray sheets over the city, washing the streets clean of everything except the truth that Albert Crane couldn't seem to escape. He stood in the doorway of apartment 4B, hands shoved deep in the pockets of his worn trench coat, watching the forensic team work. The body had been discovered at 6:47 a.m. by a neighbor who'd noticed the door ajar. By the time Albert arrived, the hallway already smelled of coffee, wet carpet, and something metallic that no amount of air freshener would ever mask. "Albert." Detective Rosa Mendez greeted him with a nod, her voice low and careful. "Glad you could make it." "You said it was him," Albert replied, not looking at her. "The same signature." Rosa didn't answer right away. She waited until they were alone near the kitchen, out of earshot of the younger officers. "It's him. Same knife, same method, same sick little ritual with the photographs arranged in a circle o...

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elisecdavies24
elisecdavies24

that is a weird place to leave off. I'm assuming this killer has an M.O. he/she follows. If you want more feedback, work on completing the chapter. Because this one is beginning just fine. All the elements of a top notch thriller/murder mystery.

I would absolutely read/comment/review. Get to work. I'll check back when you have more under your belt. Set up is cool...pace is fast and flowing. All the infor is listed for a solid, well-written read. Can't wait to see what you come up with....

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Ria Bogart
Ria Bogart


I don't quite get it. Is this the whole story? The status says "completed." If this is all there is, it’s confusing. But if it’s not the end, I’d like to read the rest.

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